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Sand In Our Toes
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Sand In Our Toes |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now 
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“SAND IN OUR TOES” by Bill Charles ~~~~ On the beach, walking the bay… saw you there one sunny day… Eyes open, just looking around, knew you wanted to be found… Your hand taken into mine, fingers locking, if to align… Hearts beating into one blossom, lovers perhaps, to be the outcome… Did this on the beach one day, glad you were coming, my way… It was going to happen I suppose, walking, with sand in our toes… ~~~~ |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (sigh) You are soooooooo romantic, sweet friend, may you forever walk hand in hand with your love on the beachside with sand between your toes and find true happiness forever! (big hugggsssss) We all love you so much, sweet friend, you are a delight to us all! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Bill, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* what a wonderful way to meet....now it is up to fate to decide what the future will hold for these two walking barefoot in the sand holding hands...*sigh* romantically magical...Well done, Bill. **big hugs**  Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Love this Bill....reminds me of a song from the 50's or 60's but I don't remember all the words. I can hum a few bars...if you listen carefully you might remember it too. Went something like.... "remember ...walkin' in the sand, ...walkin' hand in hand.... remember" The word 'remember' was almost whispered. Oh I'm going to be up all night now trying to remember it. If you know....please ICQ me? Anyway, I love this! ~Hugs, Nancy~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Bill Your title grabbed my attention and I just had to read this and I have to say I thought it was absolutely awesome. How vivid were the images of two souls meeting on the sand as love made its way into their hearts. So stunning were your words and so very romantic, I adored it! Take care......Sue Suetang |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Bill, you and Startime have been spending some good beach time lately. I am envious. Sandra |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Bill darling boy WONDERFUL WRITING Utterly utterly fabulous and absolutely perfect flow there is NO ONE who does it like YOU which is just as well really because they couldn’t match up. I just love getting sand between my toes. And loved getting this into my library Absolutely fabulous writing, and you know I love it don’t you? Mmmmmm I do It’s utterly excellent    Love and warm stuff As always Mushy To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1 |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Bill looks like walking on the beach is paying off for you...James |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Bill, were you beachcombing for treasure...looks like you fopund it both in the poem and the love. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
haven't been to the beach in....hmm can't even recall how long it has been, I guess that should be one of my next adventures *s nicely done, BC ~Wynter |
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
I see you there - meandering about the lighthouse... all sandy & stuff... |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
loved it,my friend |
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sodpossom Senior Member
since 2001-06-15
Posts 723N.C |
Sounds like a very lovely meeting.Very nice! |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
What an enchanting day....spending time on the beach..lovely Bill~ Lauren~ Step through the |
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