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Open Poetry #18

FREEDOM (free verse #2)

Larry C

Member Patricius

since 2001-09-10

Posts 10286
United States

0 posted 2002-01-30 12:39 PM

by Larry Chadwick

They are from a cave
Guests of bin laden
Representing parasites
Their ideology is hate
Fighting for supremacy
Ensuring their defeat
Terror is their game
Death is but the score
Criminals of the world
Prisoners of their shame
POWs they are not
Repatriated to a cave
Without a government
They started what they got
We kept what we started…
FREEDOM

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

1 posted 2002-01-30 01:02 AM

Peace to that....amazing you are, gifted in words....

Lauren~

Step through the
barrier of my mind,
enter my soul,
feel my desire,
let my eyes guide you
into the shadows
of my heart

Larry C

Member Patricius

since 2001-09-10

Posts 10286
United States

2 posted 2002-01-30 01:23 AM

Thank you Lauren. It is all complicated. I won't trouble you with what is behind the poem in my head...but this is the only way I could get it out.

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

3 posted 2002-01-30 01:25 AM

Larry~

I know complicated...

..and I think I know what you are saying...its hard yes, but you have done good...

Step through the
barrier of my mind,
enter my soul,
feel my desire,
let my eyes guide you
into the shadows
of my heart

Larry C

Member Patricius

since 2001-09-10

Posts 10286
United States

4 posted 2002-01-30 01:30 AM

Thanks. I started to explain and hit delete. It was looking like a political dissertation. LOL

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