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Magnus

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since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

0 posted 2002-01-03 07:09 PM

Till the end of this moment, I will...
Till my last drop falls, I will...
Till a breath no longer escapes...I won’t
For...till all is done...I am here..for you.

I see your eyes, the glimmer of love...
Your face, the beacon that calls me.
Your voice, the whisper that caresses.
You...all of you...all that I want or need.

Each moment with you feels so short.
Each moment away an agony of eternity.
Living for each moment, I await you.
Your moments become ours, we are one.

Give me your most tender, tasteful kiss.
Let me drink of your wine that flows.
Taste mine own as our lips are joined.
You quench my thirst, kindle my desire.

Flames burn hot within my aching mind.
The fires of passion shall not dim tonight.
Smouldering coals of love reflecting.
The warmth of you...I hold in my arms.

If you were here...I would ravage you
as sighs of joy escape both our lips.
Our shudders would become a quake
as a moment of ecstacy overwhelms us.

I shall await your waking moment.
For within your sleep...love flourishes.
Our bodies joined in our minds together
wait for the rise of the sun, our passions.

Duncan
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since 2001-08-07

Posts 5455

1 posted 2002-01-03 07:28 PM

Flames burn hot within my aching mind.
The fires of passion shall not dim tonight.
Smouldering coals of love reflecting.
The warmth of you...I hold in my arms.

This is what true love is! You're a lucky man, Magnus.

Irish Rose
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since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

2 posted 2002-01-03 07:50 PM

I agree with Duncan and so is she!

My perception of truth will somehow never quite be the same..and so I write.

strbbux
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since 2001-12-19

Posts 3859

3 posted 2002-01-03 08:02 PM

Nothing like love is there. nice write. great expression. floria

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

4 posted 2002-01-03 08:09 PM

If you were here...I would ravage you
as sighs of joy escape both our lips.
Our shudders would become a quake
as a moment of ecstacy overwhelms us.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
SIGH ALERT!!! MAJOR SIGHS HAPPENING UP NORTH!
*smile* Great write Barry!
~Hugs, Nancy~

~* A dream is a wish your heart makes... *~

Magnus

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since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

5 posted 2002-01-03 08:11 PM

Duncan, YEP...thanx much for the reply...

Magnus

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since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

6 posted 2002-01-03 08:12 PM

Kay...thank you...She still puts up with me.
That says something...And reads some of this.
Sits with her jaw slack...sometimes misty
eyed...wondering where this romantic man
came from.

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

7 posted 2002-01-03 08:16 PM

(sigh) You are soooooooooo romantic, sweet friend, may these eternal passions forever burn brightly in your heart and fill your heart with true loves happiness forever as the hidden sun will always rise and set in loves eyes! (big hugggssssss) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is gorgeous! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Barry, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Magnus

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since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

8 posted 2002-01-03 08:17 PM

Floria...this is what I enjoy doing...Just
a part of my expression...Thank You.

Magnus

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since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

9 posted 2002-01-03 08:18 PM

Oh wow...Nancy....now you have gone and
done it again....Thanx...happy to see
major sighs from way up yonder...

Ariana
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since 2000-10-08

Posts 571
Orlando, Florida

10 posted 2002-01-03 08:47 PM

Mr "M":
Now you are cranking them out, real scorchers and I was waiting. Didn't take you too long. You are sooooooooooo romantic. Thanks for sharing.

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

11 posted 2002-01-03 08:51 PM

Ariana...yep...but I have slowed down a little
these last few weeks...

I am happy that you do very much enjoy these
poems of love...

MyEnchanted_Melody
Senior Member

since 2001-05-30

Posts 1106
across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be.

12 posted 2002-01-03 08:59 PM

~Sigh~
This is a wonderful passionate write...

Took my breath away at some moments....

thank you
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

13 posted 2002-01-03 09:04 PM

Thank You MyEnchanted....I don't guess I
will ever remember first names very well.
I always remember the comments...but I am
horrible about the names...I apologize...
Just part of getting older...

Magnus

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since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

14 posted 2002-01-03 09:04 PM

Noah...as always...you never fail...Thank
you..

peppermint35
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since 2000-05-28

Posts 1106
Texas, USA

15 posted 2002-01-03 10:45 PM

Absolutely breathtaking.. I agree!!!

Pepper
"A poem is the very image of life expressed in its eternal truth."
Percy Bysshe Shelley

Ivy Rose
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since 2001-12-29

Posts 1300
MA, USA

16 posted 2002-01-03 11:24 PM

Magnus...Smouldering passion in this poem. Passion flows like a raging river in its words. ***Ivy Rose

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

17 posted 2002-01-03 11:33 PM

Magnus~
*grinning* here ...
'Passions At Daybreak' could' easily have been the title of mine~

'You quench my thirst, kindle my desire.'

Oh yes !
I think perhaps we sip from the same cup of happiness~
Here's a toast to you and yours~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
[email protected]

Virgo_Rains
Member

since 2001-12-03

Posts 54
Pacific Northwest, U.S.A.

18 posted 2002-01-03 11:57 PM

Magnus,
Oh Wow..breathtaking..it is one I would love to share with someone special...magnificent writing...you say it all!

VR

Startime
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since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

19 posted 2002-01-04 12:01 PM

WOW!!!!Sizzling at daybreak. Hot one here......that brings all the ladies of passions out sighing. BRAVO!!! Now Barry, about that clone... Too cute. I love it. **big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

GhostWriter_6
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since 2001-09-03

Posts 237
??Amityville??

20 posted 2002-01-05 01:50 PM

a trully well constructed write

heather_kitn
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since 2001-12-07

Posts 61
In The Kokapelli's Song

21 posted 2002-01-05 01:53 PM

Beauty and, above all, Love abounds in your words.

-heather

I do not seek...I find!
~Picasso~

Magnus

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since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

22 posted 2002-01-05 04:05 PM

Pepper...happy that you enjoyed..Thanx...

Magnus

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since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

23 posted 2002-01-05 04:06 PM

Ivy Rose...thank you...that is exactly the
way I wanted it to read..

Magnus

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since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

24 posted 2002-01-05 04:07 PM

Marge, I always enjoy your thoughts...

Yes, we could drink from the same cup...

Thank You..

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

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Listening to every heart

25 posted 2002-01-05 06:41 PM

I read this not one, but several ways, and I thank you for lending such lines...

Magnus

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since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

26 posted 2002-01-05 07:40 PM

Virgo...pleases me much when I see words like
those you have expressed...thank you

Magnus

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since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

27 posted 2002-01-05 07:42 PM

Karen...Gosh....I am sorry to report that
the clone you requested has been stolen.
Another one is being formulated as we write.

A heavy dose of romance and soft words are
being loaded into the mind...

Should be there by this time next week...

Please be patient..

Magnus

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since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

28 posted 2002-01-05 07:43 PM

Ghostwriter_6, Thank You very much...Just
something that I enjoy doing..

Magnus

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since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

29 posted 2002-01-05 07:44 PM

Heather, thank you very much. Happy you
enjoyed the poem..

Magnus

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since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

30 posted 2002-01-05 07:49 PM

Kari, I want you to know that I always
enjoy your critique of my words...You are
very perceptive and know much of feelings
and thoughts.... Thank you.

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
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31 posted 2002-01-06 02:07 AM

passions indeed, very nice

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