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Open Poetry #18

Being a Part of Me

Dusty Rhodes
Junior Member

since 2001-10-14

Posts 27

0 posted 2002-01-05 01:55 AM

There is a part you have of me
One that was given in spirit grace
Given to have and to always be
For you to have, to hold in place

Time has no meaning when we do talk
For in our closeness, nothing is lost
Mountains or valleys we do walk
Plains or rivers are easy to cross

What there is, is what I can give
Even when times take us apart
In my thoughts you also live
As you have become part of my heart

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

1 posted 2002-01-05 01:58 AM

Dusty, this is beautiful! To stay with someone, and keep them in your heart even when you are miles apart, that sounds like Love to me.

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

2 posted 2002-01-05 06:27 AM

This has an easy, timeless grace, which calls across the miles...and unless one knows, these are words not easily shared...

a wonderful baring of the soul...

write on...

Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

3 posted 2002-01-05 06:46 AM

Wonderful words here Dusty.
Kethry.

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown

hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius

since 1999-07-05

Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA

4 posted 2002-01-05 09:45 AM

Dusty...great poem. If that's your real name and you live in PA, I believe we're nearly neighbors.

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

5 posted 2002-01-05 01:59 PM

very sentimental thoughts that I can well relate to.

Kathleen--
Neither genius, fame, nor love show the greatness of the soul.
Only kindness can do that. ~Jean Baptiste Henri Lacordaire~

strbbux
Member Elite

since 2001-12-19

Posts 3859

6 posted 2002-01-05 02:05 PM

dusty this is as sweet a message as I have heard, very well done. floria

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

7 posted 2002-01-06 01:58 AM

beautiful

C?
Member

since 2001-12-29

Posts 190

8 posted 2002-01-06 02:02 AM

this also makes a moving song!!

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