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Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

0 posted 2002-01-28 08:05 PM

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Dance Of The Mermaid
By: Noah Eaton
1/28/02

The young lolita mermaid sits on her crystal throne
Watching as starfish fill the waters like fireflies in the night
Lighting her dreams kingdom with silhouettes of eternal abode
Bringing pearl tears to her robin egg blue eyes

She notices a strobe light flashing over the ocean surface
Rising above the waters she spots the flicker of a lighthouse
Guiding a caravel to shore, she eyes a lonely sea captain through the ginseng mist
Smiling to the beauty of him, she rushes over, singing aloud

The lonely sea captain turns, his face glowing to the moon
As the mermaid sighs in joy, charmed by his manly beauty
Simpering like a lovesick little girl, softly she swoons
Finally having the courage to sing her siren song happily

On the velvet lagoon, the mermaid watches her lovers face shine
He noticing the coruscant beacon of her starlit eyes
He sighs in heavenly rapture, having finally found a mermaid in delight
Both meeting finally, dreaming to seek loves true prize…

[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (01-28-2002 08:05 PM).]

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

1 posted 2002-01-28 08:10 PM

This is beautiful, Noah!

Kathleen--(Kay)
"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee

brianbeaudry
Member

since 2001-07-20

Posts 410
Northern Ontario Canada

2 posted 2002-01-28 08:18 PM

A magical journey you have penned for us Noah...Beautiful imagery and mystical romance!!! Bravo my friend!!!

RosePetal

Member Elite

since 2001-08-26

Posts 2985
South Florida

3 posted 2002-01-28 08:18 PM

You definitly have a way with words Noah!
You pull your reads straight into the story and keep us coming back for more

This is beautiful..I can't wait to see part 3

RP

strbbux
Member Elite

since 2001-12-19

Posts 3859

4 posted 2002-01-28 11:00 PM

Anothe mermaid poem Noah, You will be able to fill a book soon, I love those darling creatures. floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

5 posted 2002-01-28 11:08 PM

Noah, you have stolen my heart wih these poems. I have a few mermaid poems too. I will send them to you, if I can find them.
Sandra

Victoria

Member Ascendant

since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

6 posted 2002-02-01 09:34 AM

looking forward to your next one too Noah..enjoying your words hon

~Vic

You can complain because roses have thorns, or you can rejoice because thorns have roses.

-Ziggy

Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

7 posted 2002-02-01 10:10 AM

As always Noah, your words amaze me.
Keth

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

8 posted 2002-02-01 11:02 AM

Noah, I am keeping this one.....

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