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Interloper
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Deep in the heart

0 posted 2002-01-30 03:56 PM



love in wintertime
its fun to generate heat
let's do it year 'round

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

© Copyright 2002 The Tall Texan aka Doctor Love - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-01-30 04:00 PM



blankets cascading
quilts warming snowily white
hibernating snugs

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2 posted 2002-01-30 04:05 PM


electric blankets
possible shock therapy
electrifying

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

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3 posted 2002-01-30 04:13 PM


northern light embers
blanket lovers in embrace
through the long winter



(smiles) Oooooooohhh...this is soooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I've missed your lovely words so much, you truly are our doctor of love! (big hugggsssss) Sooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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4 posted 2002-01-30 04:19 PM


northern lights dancing
caused by human lovemaking
a little known fact

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

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5 posted 2002-01-30 04:23 PM


I will second this...seems like a good plan.
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6 posted 2002-01-30 04:46 PM


With 12-16 inches of snow expected by tomorrow evening....you can bet there will be a lot of snuggles happening.  I predict a 'cuddle alert!'
Nice one...
~Hugs, Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
  So you won't ever forget me~

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7 posted 2002-01-30 06:09 PM


That was a nice thought and the second one even better. So that is the source of the Northern Lights, hm? I remember the one time I saw them, I was a teenager, and the sky turned RED. Thought God was coming to strike me dead for what I was doing at the time.
Sandra

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8 posted 2002-01-30 06:12 PM


Its really warm where I am, but I still wanna cuddle hehehe nice senryu
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9 posted 2002-01-30 06:13 PM


mmmmmmmm I love the idea of snuggling when it is snowing out side....there is such a passionate heat one generates....*sigh* I love this poem...Interloper...**big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

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10 posted 2002-01-30 08:08 PM


Well, it's the only winter sport I care for...let the generating begin!
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11 posted 2002-01-30 08:57 PM


So now everyone knows what causes the northern lights.

The secret is out.
Northern lights can make you shout.
Or YOU shout them out?

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12 posted 2002-01-30 09:06 PM


InterLoper~

In chill of winter
You have found the quilting hour
Snuggle-down delight
Bound to keep us just till morn
Then we'll need to hibernate


You ROCK poet~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
         noles1@totcon.com                    

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13 posted 2002-01-30 09:12 PM


I like this Interloper, it is short, powerful and sooooooo sweet. floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

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with you
14 posted 2002-01-30 10:46 PM


come, pretend there's snow
cover me in warmth of you
snuggle me in love

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15 posted 2002-01-31 06:04 PM


Thank you all for your wonderful comments!

You are the gr8est!

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

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Deep in the heart
16 posted 2002-01-31 06:08 PM


it's just an excuse
I don't need winter to snuggle
you're reason enough

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

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17 posted 2002-01-31 09:11 PM


This is so sweet. It's great to cuddle regardless of the weather.
2dalimit
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18 posted 2002-02-01 08:06 AM


Winter Fall Summer
But, best for all the seasons
"Spring" time is for love


Nice, warm feelings.

Melton

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Deep in the heart
19 posted 2002-02-01 11:39 AM


2dalimit~
any time is right
when two lovers share their love
the season is now

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

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