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Open Poetry #18

When Shadows are Empty

Professor Gloom
Member Elite

since 2000-07-23

Posts 3082
of Depression

0 posted 2002-01-28 11:04 AM

When will shadows not be full,
Just shadows,
Nothing inside to give a pull,
When will you not stop to look there,
In shadows,
When will you start to look elsewhere
Than the place full of empty
Deeps shadows
Where remembrances flee.

Look to light,
Places the sun shines so bright;
Not the night
Where darkness obscures your sight.

Gloom

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

1 posted 2002-01-28 12:02 PM

sometimes
you give good advice
in your words

M

Professor Gloom
Member Elite

since 2000-07-23

Posts 3082
of Depression

2 posted 2002-01-28 01:53 PM

Thank you, Nakdthoughts,
Sometimes people actually listen to advice,
But most times not.

Gloom

strbbux
Member Elite

since 2001-12-19

Posts 3859

3 posted 2002-01-28 02:20 PM

Professor, this is wonderful.Always look to the Light,, always, floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

4 posted 2002-01-28 03:24 PM

Shadows and light...can't have one without the other! And I am once again confounded by how gracefully you make this form work. It's beyond my capability...

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