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Son Netier
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0 posted 2002-01-14 09:57 PM


In light softly glowing by the moonbeams
My eyes adjust to see sleeping beauty,
It’s real although a fantasy it seems
To wake with your magic beside of me.
Arriving unexpected while I dream,
I see you watch my waking to what is real,
Blue eyes sparkle in a skin of light cream,
I hesitate to dissipate with feel,
But reaching I enfold you in my dream,
We intertwine beyond waking moments
Mingle fantasy and glowing moonbeams,
Then the sun rises and the night is spent.
~ The sound of the closing door wakes me up,
~ A note rests under a steaming teacup.

Bill


© Copyright 2002 Bill Shivers - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-01-14 10:04 PM


Bill....this is a lovely morning scene....

God bless America, my home sweet home.

Ivy Rose
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2 posted 2002-01-14 10:22 PM


Lovely , poetic expression of waking and rising to love and a new day  ***Ivy Rose
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3 posted 2002-01-14 11:59 PM




(sigh) Soooooooo beautiful, sweet Bill, may this true love always be a dream come true to you and forever light you with happiness every morning and everyday! (big hugggsssss) We all love you so much, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Bill, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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4 posted 2002-01-28 03:12 PM


Mingle fantasy and glowing moonbeams..

dream or not, it's a pleasant read

M

[This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (01-28-2002 03:29 PM).]

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