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Day Dream |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England 
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Day Dream Dreams that are dreamt on a hot summer’s day Heated visions that make my hips move and sway The bees buzzing quietly as we lie together here Where there’s no hustle and bustle no sense of fear Your hand lying softly on my skin warming me Just as the sun warms my face but more tenderly The bees are buzzing and their noise falls away Then there’s just the two of us ready to play Dreams those night visions that float so free Invading the summers day soft and dreamily The sky is a beautiful shade of cornflower blue And the flowers around us are a rainbow hue There’s no clouds drifting across the clear sky And we can float to heaven on the wind’s sigh There’s no one around it’s just you and me And this is the only place I want to be Dreams floating in the air like bubbled light Soothing the soul and illuming our sight No cares, no worries we’ve sent them away Here in this haven of love’s heat we’ll stay I’ll feed you tasty morsels bite by bite And watch as the day gives way to night Such summer dreams lead to night’s pleasure Dreams floating you through a time of leisure Marsha To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1 |
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Ivy Rose Senior Member
since 2001-12-29
Posts 1300MA, USA |
Sounds like a wonderful day of dreaming and pasion. Your poem is just lovely and full of poetic nuance. ***Ivy Rose |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
What a lovely way to spend a day, Marsha. Thanks for sharing this beautiful jewel.  -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
Mmmmm yes..two lovers under the sun...Perfect! Two lovers under a moonlit sky..heaven on earth. This is really lovely Marsha!  |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) You are soooooooo romantic, sweet friend, this is a gorgeous poem of true loves paradise! (kiss on cheek) May you forever drift on loves dreams and find light and joy always with love close to your heart! We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is sooooooo dreamy! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Mushy, thank you for sharing!   May love and light always shin eupon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Mushy, You are huge risk taker. 'Cause if one of you rolls on that bee...well it will be rude interruption to this dream!  Sexy write.[This message has been edited by Larry C (01-27-2002 11:50 PM).] |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Oh to dream in the night of day. This was so pretty Marsha~ |
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N orth Carolina Girl Senior Member
since 2001-12-04
Posts 962NC,USA |
Marsha,so romantic and full of passion.This sure does sound like true love.    Juanita |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Ivy Rose darling girl thank you so much, it’s a poetic picnic supposed to summon up visions of the summer and long hot afternoons lazing by the river. I say river because I live close enough to it to make it viable to have lunch by it and still be able to pop home for the strawberries and cream. Of course if you want to be truly Kentish you’d have picked the strawberries yourself and fetched the cream from the farm. Also both within striking distance of the river and my house. Thank you muchly I’m pleased you like it Love and warm stuff As always Mushy To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1 |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Newell darling boy thank you muchly, so do you want to share my strawberries? Mmmmmm I always think there’s nothing quite so summery as eating strawberries that are warm from the sun and feeling the sun bathing your skin with it’s smile. Now lie back and bask darling boy, doesn’t that feel good? I hope so  Love and warm stuff As always Mushy To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1 |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Joanna darling girl Ahhhhhh Love certainly suits you sweetie, you are glowing. Yes darling girl utterly heavenly to float in the arms of love on the back of a whisper’s caress. Thank you darling girl Love and warm stuff As always Mushy :kissTo give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1 |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Noah darling boy thank you muchly, it’s always a joy to se your name on my posts thank you Love and warm stuff As always Mushy To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1 |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Larry darling boy I’ll promise that if there’s any bees around I won’t roll on them. Mmmmmm they wouldn’t dare interrupt me when I’m emmmm sunning myself. Thank you darling boy I’m pleased you liked it Love and warm stuff As always Mushy :kissTo give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1 |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Blue Serenade Thank you I’m so pleased you enjoyed it. I was aiming for soft and pretty. Love and warm stuff As always Mushy To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1 |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Juanita my dearest friend Oh darling girl thank you so much, YOU know how much I love your writing, you truly do inspire me Love and warm stuff As always Mushy To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1 |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Beautiful visions, Marsha. Sandra |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Marsha - just keep writing these works of art. They are very good, and I'll keep reading them, as long as you write them... BC |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* sensual perfection...I just love the way all your love poems are filled with the sensuality that flows within you....Absolutely stunning. Did I say I love it? WELL..I LOVE IT!!! **big hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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sodpossom Senior Member
since 2001-06-15
Posts 723N.C |
Marsha Just simply lovely as usual! |
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