Open Poetry #18 |
Caresses Of The Night (Duet With Kethry) |
Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
Caresses in the Night Noah Eaton & Kethry 1/27/02 Red: Kethry Blue: Noah I touch your skin alabaster white Caressing in waves of tender delight In dreams I see you and you touch me You open heart’s gate with your sacred key Lover of the night come drink your fill Here I am waiting pliant and still. Until these scarves of stars fall upon us both And daylight comes to seal my troth Hand in hand we will hold the others dreams close Lifted by the rainbow of dreams not morose In dark of night where passion flares up You’re my delight from you I will sup In the lambent candlelight we will bask Giving and taking our love is all we ask Encrusted in the jewels of endless days we’ll cherish Without a care sharing no soul’s blemish Lying under a crescent moon in lustrous embrace Taking a sip from loves celestial chalice Drinking deep of love till passion is sated Drinking to our hearts content, our love fated Waiting the thrill of your touch once and again Through gentle rhythm, our hearts amend Following the examples of the turtle dove Quilted on the mattress of unconditional love Surrendering sweetly into your vast reverie Flowing together; the you and the me Weltering in laughter of cupids lightning Conjoined together in passion that’s frightening Humbled before you I wait here always Together we’ll be till the end of our days Haunted by moonlight caressed by your kiss Knowing in wonder it comes down to this Together we’ll uncork kismet champagne Drinking to a love that we could never feign Wherever you will go, I will take your hand in flight We make love to each other, with soft caresses in the night [This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (01-28-2002 08:06 AM).] |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Noah Eaton & Kethry, this poem is very beautiful. I can think of no sweeter caresses than you describe. Thanks for sharing. -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
ooohhh the last stanza closes this beautiful poem wonderfully. You two make a nice team I like, I like! RP |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Noah and Kethry! What a beautiful duet! You two sing beautifully together! Very very well done and enjoyed so much! ~Hugs, Nancy~ ~Love, like magic, depends on believing.~ |
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jennirey Member
since 2002-01-24
Posts 198North Richland HillsTx |
I love this line, Wow!!! "Flowing together; the you and the me Weltering in laughter of cupids lightning" Please take a bow, this was an awesome poem to read.. Gave me shivers as i was here listening to "Songbird" By Fleetwood Mac And almost a tear.. Thank you Jen Treasure every moment that you have! |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Blended nicely ...congratulations both of you on doing such a fine job together..enjoyed.. ~Vic You can complain because roses have thorns, or you can rejoice because thorns have roses. |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
Noah and Kethry, what a sweet love poem. You two write wonderfully together and I hope to see another duet by you in the future. Michael Michael Auguste~ |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Keth darling sister and my heart and Noah darling boy, what wonderful writing this is. An aside to Noah tell me you did all the hard work didn’t you? Oh yes love I know Oh Keth darling heart I didn’t see you there, don’t creep up on me like that, you’ll give me a heart attack darling girl. Yes yes it’s wonderful, and I know full well who did all the work, don’t try and fool me darling heart. Noah magnificent writing darling boy glad you made it through the ordeal. Wicked smile I love the whole poem but these verses fairly sang to me ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Drinking deep of love till passion is sated Drinking to our hearts content, our love fated Waiting the thrill of your touch once and again Through gentle rhythm, our hearts amend Following the examples of the turtle dove Quilted on the mattress of unconditional love Surrendering sweetly into your vast reverie Flowing together; the you and the me Weltering in laughter of cupids lightning Conjoined together in passion that’s frightening Humbled before you I wait here always Together we’ll be till the end of our days ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ I did tell you that I really do love this one didn’t I? Good because I do!! Love and warm stuff As always Mushy To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1 |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Noah & Kethry, Okay you two...this flowed together perfectly. Now I'm not sure who wrote what! |
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Ivy Rose Senior Member
since 2001-12-29
Posts 1300MA, USA |
BRAVO, NOAH and KETHRY!!!! Wonderfully presented and filled with the caress of Love's passion. ***Ivy Rose |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Noah my love, thank you for writing this with me. Now that I've re-read I can see how writing with you made a river of words that flowed to the sea. Shall we tell them who wrote what or keep them guessing? *HuGS* Keth Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
OK DAMN.....and thats a good damn....WOW such tender loving thoughts.....please dont keep us guessing... "kiss and tell" Lauren~ Step through the |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Noah and Kethry How very lovely this is, a nice duet if I ever saw one. floria Floria |
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His Poet Senior Member
since 2001-12-18
Posts 750 |
You both have solidified the saying "It takes two, baby, it takes two." One heart could never have written this so beautifully. Cheryl |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
Dear Kethry and Noah, You two make a team. This is a very good love poem, and considering my feelings about love poems,(ever since I swore off) that's saying a lot. Nan |
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Canuckster Member
since 2002-01-09
Posts 285New Mexico, USA |
Quite a touching piece all the more effective for knowing it flows from 2 people. Thanks for putting this up for us to enjoy! never try to teach a pig to sing |
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N orth Carolina Girl Senior Member
since 2001-12-04
Posts 962NC,USA |
Noah & Kethry,you two have worked magic together. Juanita |
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kimie Junior Member
since 2002-01-23
Posts 20 |
Wonderful work. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Noah - OK, now youse two must stop this romancing and caressing. Wow, what a great write. H'mmm, youse two are really good! BC |
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