Caresses Of The Night (Duet With Kethry)

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Mistletoe Angel

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0 posted 2002-01-27 09:46 PM

Caresses in the Night
Noah Eaton & Kethry
1/27/02

Red: Kethry
Blue: Noah

I touch your skin alabaster white
Caressing in waves of tender delight
In dreams I see you and you touch me
You open heart’s gate with your sacred key
Lover of the night come drink your fill
Here I am waiting pliant and still.

Until these scarves of stars fall upon us both
And daylight comes to seal my troth
Hand in hand we will hold the others dreams close
Lifted by the rainbow of dreams not morose
In dark of night where passion flares up
You’re my delight from you I will sup

In the lambent candlelight we will bask
Giving and taking our love is all we ask
Encrusted in the jewels of endless days we’ll cherish
Without a care sharing no soul’s blemish
Lying under a crescent moon in lustrous embrace
Taking a sip from loves celestial chalice

Drinking deep of love till passion is sated
Drinking to our hearts content, our love fated
Waiting the thrill of your touch once and again
Through gentle rhythm, our hearts amend
Following the examples of the turtle dove
Quilted on the mattress of unconditional love

Surrendering sweetly into your vast reverie
Flowing together; the you and the me
Weltering in laughter of cupids lightning
Conjoined together in passion that’s frightening
Humbled before you I wait here always
Together we’ll be till the end of our days

Haunted by moonlight caressed by your kiss
Knowing in wonder it comes down to this
Together we’ll uncork kismet champagne
Drinking to a love that we could never feign
Wherever you will go, I will take your hand in flight
We make love to each other, with soft caresses in the night

[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (01-28-2002 08:06 AM).]

Silver Streak
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1 posted 2002-01-27 09:50 PM

Noah Eaton & Kethry, this poem is very beautiful. I can think of no sweeter caresses than you describe. Thanks for sharing.

-newell

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Copyright: 2002 Newell Elsworth Usher

RosePetal

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2 posted 2002-01-27 09:52 PM

ooohhh the last stanza closes this beautiful poem wonderfully. You two make a nice team

I like, I like!

RP

Enchantress
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3 posted 2002-01-27 09:54 PM

Noah and Kethry! What a beautiful duet! You two sing beautifully together!
Very very well done and enjoyed so much!
~Hugs, Nancy~

~Love, like magic, depends on believing.~

jennirey
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4 posted 2002-01-27 09:55 PM

I love this line, Wow!!!

"Flowing together; the you and the me
Weltering in laughter of cupids lightning"

Please take a bow, this was an awesome poem to read.. Gave me shivers as i was here listening to "Songbird" By Fleetwood Mac
And almost a tear..

Thank you

Jen

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Yesterday is history.
Tomorrow is mystery.
Today is a gift.
That's why it's called the present!!

Victoria

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5 posted 2002-01-27 09:59 PM

Blended nicely ...congratulations both of you on doing such a fine job together..enjoyed..

~Vic

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-Ziggy

Auguste

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6 posted 2002-01-27 10:05 PM

Noah and Kethry, what a sweet love poem. You two write wonderfully together and I hope to see another duet by you in the future.

Michael

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Marsha

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7 posted 2002-01-27 10:23 PM

Keth darling sister and my heart and Noah darling boy, what wonderful writing this is.

An aside to Noah tell me you did all the hard work didn’t you? Oh yes love I know

Oh Keth darling heart I didn’t see you there, don’t creep up on me like that, you’ll give me a heart attack darling girl. Yes yes it’s wonderful, and I know full well who did all the work, don’t try and fool me darling heart.

Noah magnificent writing darling boy glad you made it through the ordeal. Wicked smile

I love the whole poem but these verses fairly sang to me
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Drinking deep of love till passion is sated
Drinking to our hearts content, our love fated
Waiting the thrill of your touch once and again
Through gentle rhythm, our hearts amend
Following the examples of the turtle dove
Quilted on the mattress of unconditional love

Surrendering sweetly into your vast reverie
Flowing together; the you and the me
Weltering in laughter of cupids lightning
Conjoined together in passion that’s frightening
Humbled before you I wait here always
Together we’ll be till the end of our days
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

I did tell you that I really do love this one didn’t I? Good because I do!!

Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

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Larry C

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8 posted 2002-01-27 11:01 PM

Noah & Kethry,
Okay you two...this flowed together perfectly. Now I'm not sure who wrote what!

Ivy Rose
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9 posted 2002-01-27 11:30 PM

BRAVO, NOAH and KETHRY!!!! Wonderfully presented and filled with the caress of Love's passion. ***Ivy Rose

Kethry
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10 posted 2002-01-28 01:35 AM

Noah my love,
thank you for writing this with me. Now that I've re-read I can see how writing with you made a river of words that flowed to the sea. Shall we tell them who wrote what or keep them guessing?
*HuGS*
Keth

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Greeneyes

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11 posted 2002-01-28 01:39 AM

OK DAMN.....and thats a good damn....WOW such tender loving thoughts.....please dont keep us guessing... "kiss and tell"

Lauren~

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barrier of my mind,
enter my soul,
feel my desire,
let my eyes guide you
into the shadows
of my heart

strbbux
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12 posted 2002-01-28 10:55 AM

Noah and Kethry How very lovely this is, a nice duet if I ever saw one. floria

Floria

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But die with all their music in them"
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His Poet
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13 posted 2002-01-28 11:05 AM

You both have solidified the saying "It takes two, baby, it takes two." One heart could never have written this so beautifully. Cheryl

Pilgrimage
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14 posted 2002-01-28 12:50 PM

Dear Kethry and Noah,
You two make a team. This is a very good love poem, and considering my feelings about love poems,(ever since I swore off) that's saying a lot.

Nan

Canuckster
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15 posted 2002-01-28 02:12 PM

Quite a touching piece all the more effective for knowing it flows from 2 people.

Thanks for putting this up for us to enjoy!

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it wastes your time AND annoys the pig

N orth Carolina Girl
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