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kimie
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since 2002-01-23

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0 posted 2002-01-27 01:18 PM

How many times have I cried
on your shoulders and you
so sweetly hugged my tears away
But this time your hugs turned
into kisses
you kissed my cheek then my lips
I tried to say something but your
lips silenced me
My good friend can this friendship
be anything else?
you know I love him dearly
But for now I can't stop your kisses
from trying to erase his scent
Thanks for being my friend

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Gaia

1 posted 2002-01-27 01:27 PM

Wow, Kimie. This is powerful, full of emotional imagery. Well done sweet poetess! Perhaps that friend is closer to the heart?

Startime
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since 2000-10-03

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2 posted 2002-01-27 01:29 PM

I think there is a little more involved than kissing than friendship...these kisses seemed to silence you into a very tender feeling. Magnificent writing. **big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

doreen peri
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3 posted 2002-01-27 01:51 PM

yikes!! careful now.... sounds dangerous to me....

you wrote this dilemma very well!

Silver Streak
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4 posted 2002-01-27 02:09 PM

Friendship mixed with desire can be a sweet illusion. Take care!

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JamesMichael
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5 posted 2002-01-27 02:19 PM

This seems to be progressing a little past a friendship...James

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By the sea

6 posted 2002-01-27 02:27 PM

Oh my...

Michael Auguste~
There is more depth to the heart than the mind can comprehend and it only has boundaries when we choose to fence it in.

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

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Canada eh.

7 posted 2002-01-27 03:25 PM

Kimie, this is very well expressed....the eternal triangle it would seem.
~Hugs, Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So you won't ever forget me~

SmartChick
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On A Journey To The Unknown

8 posted 2002-01-27 03:31 PM

Oh my! You be careful now. Sounds like this might be a little more than just friendship.

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9 posted 2002-01-27 04:39 PM

be cautious kimie...friendship lasts a lot longer than relationships! good luck

Irish Rose
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10 posted 2002-01-27 04:45 PM

this, I like, like very much

Kathleen--(Kay)
A true friend does not love you for who you are, but in spite of who you are." -- Caroline Tran

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