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| Open Poetry #18 |
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Your lips silenced me |
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kimie Junior Member
since 2002-01-23
Posts 20 |
How many times have I cried on your shoulders and you so sweetly hugged my tears away But this time your hugs turned into kisses you kissed my cheek then my lips I tried to say something but your lips silenced me My good friend can this friendship be anything else? you know I love him dearly But for now I can't stop your kisses from trying to erase his scent Thanks for being my friend |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Wow, Kimie. This is powerful, full of emotional imagery. Well done sweet poetess! Perhaps that friend is closer to the heart? |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
I think there is a little more involved than kissing than friendship...these kisses seemed to silence you into a very tender feeling. Magnificent writing. **big hugs**  Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
yikes!! careful now.... sounds dangerous to me.... you wrote this dilemma very well! |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Friendship mixed with desire can be a sweet illusion. Take care! -Silver Streak Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
This seems to be progressing a little past a friendship...James |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
Oh my...  Michael Auguste~ |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Kimie, this is very well expressed....the eternal triangle it would seem. ~Hugs, Nancy~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Oh my! You be careful now. Sounds like this might be a little more than just friendship. |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
be cautious kimie...friendship lasts a lot longer than relationships! good luck |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
this, I like, like very much  Kathleen--(Kay) |
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