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Open Poetry #18

Can Words Cast My Spell

D.Lester Young
Senior Member

since 2001-12-08

Posts 1219
Austin, Tx

0 posted 2002-01-27 01:00 PM

Can I cast my spell over you
In just ordinary words
Spoken so softly
That you feel your inside crawl
With pure visions

To stroke your mind with buttery wings
In a musk that needs you so
That you get dizzy in anticipation
And wets your lips in hunger
For more bodily contact

To raise your spirits so high
That your mind floats
In between my words and sighs
The hot breath of longing
To hear simple words
Wrapping around your soul

Yes words can stimulate you
In the vibrations of their tones
And in the hidden meanings
That long for more
Raising expectations even higher

If I could say the words to lay you down
In a caress of love that wraps you up
In intertwining needs of climbing climaxes
So sweet the fragrance needs more
Gentle persuasion of words

Take me
To a higher plateau and ravish me
In the dictionary of love
Screaming more and more

Until the words can calm down
To a beautiful sunrise
On a still sparkling sea
Laying bare your emotions
In the purity of the morning sun
And say words do more

D.Lester Young (01/27/02)
Tuscaloosa, AL
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[This message has been edited by D.Lester Young (01-27-2002 08:53 PM).]

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

1 posted 2002-01-27 01:10 PM

Oh My! Oh My...YES!!!
Your words do cast a spell....very well too!
...I could say more but...need to catch my breath....

Very very well done!
~Hugs, Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So you won't ever forget me~

Startime
Member Ascendant

since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

2 posted 2002-01-27 01:22 PM

*sigh* I totally agree with Nancy...your words wrap a sensual blanket of desire around your reader...This poem is absolutely magnificent. **big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

amusemi
Senior Member

since 2001-12-08

Posts 1262
A State of Disarray

3 posted 2002-01-27 03:18 PM

Very provacative! Well done.

Just believe...

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