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Come...Walk Through The Door
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Come...Walk Through The Door |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA 
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Lost from my sight, now gone forever I fear Left in the dark of night, not again be here. A love I saw, this beauty that I do need. The yearning hunger within that I must feed. She left the room, my heart shattered on the floor. Oh why, oh why could I not just step to her? My mind whirling with moments of desires. My flames licking around me from the fires. Will I ever find true love as my only quest? Shall I be always left holding love in my chest? Has this man not endured much over eternity? Will she return, will she once sense and see me? The leaves of passion fell around my two feet. Withered and dry, no longer supple or sweet. The aches of desire churning in an empty gut. Will she again come, let love just once strut? I cast the weight of the world from my soul as loneliness from the bell towers do toll. I sit and wait until love comes in the door. Oh love, come let me share, give you more. |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* just what I needed to read after the poem I just wrote....*sigh* gosh...what a romantic and loving heart you have...this poem is so tender.... I love it. **big hugs**  I am sure she will walk right back through that door and give you all the love your heart can hold. Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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kimie Junior Member
since 2002-01-23
Posts 20 |
What a beautiful love poem. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Wonderful Barry....now is this a continuation from last night?  Well done...and enjoyed thoroughly as always. ~Hugs, Nancy~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Beautifully written! Thanks for sharing.  -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
Will I ever find true love as my only quest? Shall I be always left holding love in my chest? Oh Barry, these are the same questions that I ponder to myself at times! very nicely penned poem here |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
A beautiful confession of unreqited love... So very well written, Barry.  copyright2002 Lyra Nesius |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
This is just awesome Magnus "She left the room, my heart shattered on the floor. Oh why, oh why could I not just step to her? My mind whirling with moments of desires. My flames licking around me from the fires." So visual, so much feeling, love it. floria Floria |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
See why Ron created back pages?...so I wouldn't miss what I didn't catch earlier... |
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amusemi Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1262A State of Disarray |
Oh dear poet, I hope the winds of change bring her back to you... |
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peppermint35 Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1106Texas, USA |
Truly you have expressed these feelings... a heartfelt ::sigh:: Once again, your talent shines!!! Pepper |
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