I Am (inspired by Krawdad’s “ephemeron”)

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1slick_lady
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since 2000-12-22

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standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2002-01-30 11:00 PM

I Am (inspired by Krawdad’s “ephemeron”)

I am the beach
that washes tide
your alter ego
personified

I am the wind
you can not see
but with no sight
do you only imagine me

I am the rain
true tears to earth
within each drop
gives us rebirth

I am the sun
your beaconing light
and reflect the stars
to guide your night

I am the moon
with shadows blessed
to hold a heart
in its sweet crest

I am the shore
each and every grain
we were then
we still remain

"I have already paid for all my future sins." Sade...(King of Sorrow)

Zinsser
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since 2001-02-27

Posts 1641
Calif.

1 posted 2002-01-30 11:04 PM

Helen, this is beautiful ... and yes you
are all of this...

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

2 posted 2002-01-30 11:08 PM

I am the shore
each and every grain
we were then
we still remain
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Helen...this is as usual...very exquisite!
~Hugs, Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So you won't ever forget me~

Pilgrimage
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since 2001-12-04

Posts 3945
Texas, USA

3 posted 2002-01-30 11:22 PM

I loved the poem that inspired this, and I love this one too.

Nan

Silver Streak
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since 2002-01-02

Posts 3625
FL, USA

4 posted 2002-01-30 11:23 PM

Helen, smooth as the finest silk and much more exquisite.

-newell

Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com

Copyright: 2002 Newell Elsworth Usher

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

5 posted 2002-01-30 11:26 PM

"I am the moon
with shadows blessed
to hold a heart
in its sweet crest"

Helen, this is really nice. Krawdaad inspired you well.

BluesSerenade
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since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

6 posted 2002-01-30 11:40 PM

Oh yes, to be all that!
Inspiration can be breathtaking!!

Victoria

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since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

7 posted 2002-01-30 11:49 PM

Enjoyed..very lovely indeed.. hugs

~Vic

You can complain because roses have thorns, or you can rejoice because thorns have roses.

-Ziggy

Bill Charles
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since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

8 posted 2002-01-31 02:26 AM

helen - this one is as beautiful as the others that you write. Perhaps fragile and delicate touches your pen...

BC

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

9 posted 2002-01-31 06:13 AM

so lovely

M

Krawdad
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since 2001-01-03

Posts 2597

10 posted 2002-02-03 01:34 AM

h,

Inspired this?
I'm flattered, of course, and you know where that will get you . . .
And you are welcome to any inspiration I can provide.
This is a generous and soothingly written piece. Thank you.

e

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