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Nate Dogg
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since 1999-11-15

Posts 1658
Georgia, Fulton

0 posted 2002-01-14 10:03 PM

This is one my early poems written in Daytona Beach, Fl(1999) around the same time I wrote, "The Earth Is Crying"...anyways, enjoy!!!

My heart beats like a drum
silenty transcending bass
and rhythms to kingdom come.
For every heartbeat,I breath softly
as, I'm becoming more relaxed
while lying on my sore back,
and closing my eyes
while inhaling and exhaling,
to the rhythm of life
as my mind, drifts to the skies,
vibrating, pulsating with desire,
like rings of fire and ascending higher,
above the phoenix as she flies,
with every heartbeat that belies
while my blood, is flowing smoothly
through my veins and arteries,
sending blood into my brain
and unveiling, the message of sleep.

[This message has been edited by Nate Dogg (01-15-2002 12:47 AM).]

Elizabeth

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since 1999-06-07

Posts 6871
Minnesota

1 posted 2002-01-14 10:05 PM

Good work, Nate! Nicely done here.

God bless America, my home sweet home.

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

2 posted 2002-01-14 10:26 PM

Nate, Very well done indeed. Enjoyed this write tonight.
~Hugs, Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So you won't ever forget me~

Ivy Rose
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since 2001-12-29

Posts 1300
MA, USA

3 posted 2002-01-14 10:30 PM

Nate, liked everything about this poem. A slow, sensuous descent into relaxation.

***Ivy Rose

Nate Dogg
Senior Member

since 1999-11-15

Posts 1658
Georgia, Fulton

4 posted 2002-01-14 10:33 PM

Thank you all for the lovely comments!!

Nathan

Mother_Earth
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since 2000-11-20

Posts 1370
1/2 year Texas & 1/2 year Michigan

5 posted 2002-01-14 11:47 PM

Nate, I have missed your words of wisdom. Now you have me all nice and relaxed, I am off to bed. Thanks, ME

Sven

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since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

6 posted 2002-01-14 11:49 PM

the heart beats slower in sleep. . .or does it??

you done good here Nate. . .great job. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

7 posted 2002-01-14 11:55 PM

(smiles) Soooooooo beautifully penned, sweet friend, such beautiful emotion and wisdom fills your wonderful words! (big hugggssssss) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is fabulous! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Nate, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

8 posted 2002-01-15 12:01 PM

Enjoyed this Nate...James

RosePetal

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since 2001-08-26

Posts 2985
South Florida

9 posted 2002-01-15 12:04 PM

I love your poetry, you should post more often! Oh and, I can make your heart beat faster

DYME
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since 2000-07-29

Posts 104
Texas

10 posted 2002-01-26 09:10 PM

I like this one too!! You're hogging the spotlight in my mind!! Keep doin' what cha doin'!!

I'm not crazy...I have papers to prove it!!

No weapon formed against me shall prosper... ISAIAH 54:17

Pilgrimage
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since 2001-12-04

Posts 3945
Texas, USA

11 posted 2002-01-26 09:35 PM

I liked the way you built the rhyme in these lines. Nice poem.

Nan

Nate Dogg
Senior Member

since 1999-11-15

Posts 1658
Georgia, Fulton

12 posted 2002-01-27 02:59 PM

Thanks Dyme, I don't see how I'm hogging the spotlight when I post like once or twice a month...I admit though, I had my time in the spotlight and I enjoyed it...but I just thought it was time for me to move on so other talented poets can shine mostly, meaning the new ones....peace and love!

Thanks Pilgrimage, for your nice comments!

[This message has been edited by Nate Dogg (01-27-2002 06:20 PM).]

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