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Honeybee
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since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

0 posted 2002-01-26 08:04 PM

Liquid Love
Double Tanka

Oh, love's elixir
'tis the grandest taste of all
angel's sigh on lips
just like honey to the bee
so are your kisses to me

Drink of my flavour
to dip me in sweet savour
of breathless entwine
candy coat me with kisses
and unwrap the heart of me

By Melissa P. Monette

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

1 posted 2002-01-26 08:34 PM

me thinks Melis is getting ready for her Valentines day muse

Liquid lovely dear girlie ...
chocolate and love...what else does a girl need? *L*
more perfect Tanka poetry from poetess Honeybee

His Poet
Senior Member

since 2001-12-18

Posts 750

2 posted 2002-01-26 08:52 PM

Very nice, Melissa. Cupid must be shooting arrows your way. Cheryl

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

3 posted 2002-01-26 08:59 PM

(sigh) You are sooooooo romantic, sweet friend, your words are always so sugar sweet and sprinkled with true love! (kiss on cheek) Ooohhhhh...now you're making me both hungry for chocolate and dreaming of my dream girl, this is sooooooo beautiful! We all love you so much, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Melissa, thank you for sharing!

May love and light alwyas shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Balladeer

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-05

Posts 25505
Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA

4 posted 2002-01-26 10:07 PM

This poem is sweeter that a ton of those Hershey kisses, Melissa! You are so CUTE!!!!!

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

5 posted 2002-01-26 10:23 PM

Well done Melissa!
Tanka for the double tanka!

~Hugs, Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So you won't ever forget me~

strbbux
Member Elite

since 2001-12-19

Posts 3859

6 posted 2002-01-26 10:28 PM

Oh so so sweet Melissa, so sweet, floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

Chelsea~
Member

since 2001-02-09

Posts 260
Ontario, CANADA

7 posted 2002-01-27 05:45 PM

missy,

you've mastered this
form perfectly - I
really enjoyed these,
very well said!

dgvarner
Member Elite

since 2000-05-13

Posts 3552
High Springs, Florida

8 posted 2002-01-27 05:51 PM

woohoo! this is tasty!!

hugs, g

~dgvarner/fallen rain~

"and i'd give up forever to touch you..cause i know you can feel me somehow..." -googoo dolls

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