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BtwnRockandHardPlace
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since 2001-10-23
Posts 98
NJ, USA

0 posted 2002-01-25 10:07 PM


I’m in love with you.
You’re in love with me.
How much better can it be?

For in my life I never did feel
love like this, so deep, so real.
I've learned in my life
to expect nothing,
yet you've given me more
than I could have dreamed.

If it should end tomorrow
I will feel much
more than only sorrow.
For you my love,
have taught me something new.
That by giving freedom to us both,
to be myself and let you be you,
we've let love in
and gave it room to grow.
And love like that
will naturally show.

I will continue to love you,
forever now,
without expectations.
To that I vow.
Because this is the way
you've showed me.
'Tis something I won't forget.
Now that I've had this emotion,
I feel liberty and no regret.




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dawn to dusk
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since 2001-12-09
Posts 68
Colorado
1 posted 2002-01-25 10:09 PM


"Love made me free"


VERY NICE!  I liked reading this!  Isn't love great?   .  Great work.  


Noelle

"Hold fast to dreams, for is dreams die, life is a broken winged bird that cannot fly"  Langston Hughes

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2 posted 2002-01-25 10:47 PM




(sigh) You are soooooooo romantic, sweet friend, I am so happy to feel the joy in your words and that you've found true love! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, we've all missed you sooooooooo much, I'm so happy you're back! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Benita, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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