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Professor Gloom
Member Elite

since 2000-07-23

Posts 3082
of Depression

0 posted 2002-01-23 01:19 PM

I can’t see you anymore,
But I feel your watching eyes,
You exited life’s last door,
Now more than a million cries
From that final time to this
More than a billion tears flow,
And I never fill the miss
Of having to let you go.

I feel you know what I do,
Little mess ups and mistakes,
The sadness of missing you
And all those times of heartaches;
I’ve things I’d like to replay,
And more “I love you”s to say

Gloom
for a good friend
missing one that's gone

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

1 posted 2002-01-23 01:31 PM

that's it! Brace yourself, I'm gonna hug you! (stop cringing...)

see? SMILING!

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

2 posted 2002-01-23 02:03 PM

(big hugggssssss) Oh Aszard, this is soooooo sad but beautiful, my heart goes out to you! (BIG HUGGGSSSSSS) I pray you both have found happiness ever since you left each other and that you may reunite someday and share these memories with each other in friendship! (sigh) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is so sad but beautiful! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Aszard, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (01-23-2002 02:04 PM).]

Zinsser
Senior Member

since 2001-02-27

Posts 1641
Calif.

3 posted 2002-01-23 02:15 PM

Beautiful!!!!

mauddib
Member

since 2002-01-12

Posts 119
melbourne australia

4 posted 2002-01-23 05:24 PM

in the school of hard knocks,
one, sooner or later, becomes a professor.
An apple for the teacher.

I like the subtle ryhme,
right on cue
Ive been there to.

take care and God bless

DayDreamer99
Member

since 2002-01-23

Posts 72

5 posted 2002-01-23 07:01 PM

wow...thats really all i can say..wow...i lost my brother when i was 11 and i can relate to most of what this poem is saying
Tifferz

strbbux
Member Elite

since 2001-12-19

Posts 3859

6 posted 2002-01-23 07:07 PM

Gloom, as always, very sensitively written. so nice, floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

Professor Gloom
Member Elite

since 2000-07-23

Posts 3082
of Depression

7 posted 2002-01-24 05:11 AM

Thank you, All
For the warm acceptance of my words.

Gloom

Madame Chipmunk
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-05

Posts 8296
Michigan

8 posted 2002-01-25 11:23 PM

Very beatutifully written, Gloom.
It reminds me of how I felt after my first husband died...almost 3 yrs ago!
I have now re-married and gotten on with my life, but I still miss him terribly and I feel like he is watching over me...I think it was he, who made sure that I met my new husband, David.
This just makes me cry!

And a couple of really big hugs for you!

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled" Gwendolyn Brooks

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