Open Poetry #18 |
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Greatest Gift ( First poem I wrote ) |
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brianbeaudry Member
since 2001-07-20
Posts 410Northern Ontario Canada ![]() |
Greatest Gift Of all the years that seasons weld Of all the treasures I’ve beheld Of all the beauty nature does birth Of all the laughter, all the mirth Of all the flowers perfumed scent Of all the rainbow, colored and bent Of all the moon’s rays oer the lake Of all the stars in twilight’s wake Of all the strains of songbird’s call Of all the majesty of a water’s fall Of all the blessings of good health Of all the chances of great wealth Of all that’s good and kind and right Of all the gifts that I could cite My greatest gift and joy in life Is waking up beside my wife. Brian Beaudry I wrote this for my sweet wife in celebration of our 25th anniversary in the summer of 2000. Little did I know it was just the first of many to come. |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
![]() ![]() ![]() (sigh) You are sooooooooo romantic, sweet friend, I still can remember that day when you posted this on my old Dreaming With The Daffodils forum, and I always am so happy to see how yoy write such beautiful poetry everyday now! (big hugggssssss) This poem proves that you have beena wonderful loving writer all along, and your love always shines to everyone! We are all sooooo proud of you, sweet friend, and the way I see it, this is not even close to being the last gorgeous poem you'll ever write, for we all love your words so much! God Bless You! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Brian, thank you for sharing! ![]() ![]() May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Brian How beautiful was this dedication to your adored wife, such a lucky lady she is to have so many lovely words written about her. Take care.....Sue Suetang |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Brian this is so beautiful and so wonderful for a first write. I think it would be nice to see everyones first write, YOu have inspire me to dig mine out and post it. floria Floria |
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Victoria![]()
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Its fun looking back at our first poem isnt it..mine was about ten years..maybe ill send it to you sometime if i can find it...ha.. and our writing changes from year to year at least mine does.. enjoyed Brian.. ![]() ~Victoria~ You can complain because roses have thorns, or you can rejoice because thorns have roses. |
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dawn to dusk Member
since 2001-12-09
Posts 68Colorado |
OH MY GOSH, HOW SWEET!!! This is beautiful! I really liked this one! ![]() Noelle "Hold fast to dreams, for is dreams die, life is a broken winged bird that cannot fly" Langston Hughes |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* ah yes...this was the poem that captured my heart because you write so wonderfully about the love you have for your wife....Magnificent. I am so glad for the chance to read it again...it still has power to make my heart jump with pleasure. **big hugs** ![]() Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Wonderful Brian! Your wife is one lucky lady. ~Hugs, Nancy~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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