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wayoutwalt
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0 posted 2002-01-25 07:27 PM



My reverie
Snapping-out-of-thought
Ten seconds in hell
(1. 2. 3. 4. 5. 6. 7. 8. 9. 10...)

Like reading this poem
To experience loss

© Copyright 2002 Walt Burns - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-01-25 07:48 PM




(big hugggssssss) Oh Walter, some haunted tone fills this emotional poem, I pray all is well with you and now you dream all the time of happy things and count forever with blessings of joy! (sigh) Such a wonderfully inventive poem, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Walter, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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2 posted 2002-01-25 07:54 PM



10.9.8.7.6.5.4.3.2.....1

Breathe...

cruz
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3 posted 2002-01-26 12:11 PM


8.6.7.5.3.0.9! what crazy thoughts this promoted in my head.  thanx
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4 posted 2002-01-26 12:24 PM


wayoutwalt,
Hey, so I'm trying to understand this poem. Does that mean I just lost 10 seconds? LOL Or did I completely miss it? Huh?

wayoutwalt
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5 posted 2002-01-26 12:27 PM


you lost the ten
Kethry
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6 posted 2002-01-26 02:00 AM


Count to ten and start again, double the trouble double the fun, reading your poety all on the run
Keth

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



sodpossom
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7 posted 2002-01-26 03:01 PM


I think I lost the 10 also.Very interesting!
Silver Streak
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8 posted 2002-01-26 03:46 PM


Wanna save time? Count by fives!
5, 10
Silver Streak

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