Open Poetry #18 |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
My reverie Snapping-out-of-thought Ten seconds in hell Like reading this poem To experience loss |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big hugggssssss) Oh Walter, some haunted tone fills this emotional poem, I pray all is well with you and now you dream all the time of happy things and count forever with blessings of joy! (sigh) Such a wonderfully inventive poem, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Walter, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
10.9.8.7.6.5.4.3.2.....1 Breathe... |
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cruz Member
since 2000-07-18
Posts 282Dallas,Texas USA |
8.6.7.5.3.0.9! what crazy thoughts this promoted in my head. thanx |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
wayoutwalt, Hey, so I'm trying to understand this poem. Does that mean I just lost 10 seconds? LOL Or did I completely miss it? Huh? |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
you lost the ten |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Count to ten and start again, double the trouble double the fun, reading your poety all on the run Keth Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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sodpossom Senior Member
since 2001-06-15
Posts 723N.C |
I think I lost the 10 also.Very interesting! |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Wanna save time? Count by fives! 5, 10 Silver Streak Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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