Open Poetry #18 |
Why I Cry Revisited |
Rodney Belcher Member
since 2000-06-06
Posts 227Taylor, Michigan |
The love that exists within my heart Could be spread evenly Across the midnight sky Never leaving a star untouched Each star could count another way I feel my love for you The chill that comes from an arctic wind Cannot touch me when caressed By the warmth of your love The ocean tide crashing in Could say your name with each wave But still not outlast my thoughts of you A lone eagle, flying high above Soaring so high that he is but a speck In the azure tapestry Still does not top the heights of emotion From a touch of your sweet body to mine You never give yourself credit For what you inspire in me You don’t realize your own worth To keep my world alive I dread the morning sun When you aren’t in my arms I wish the dark would never lift Until the brightness that is you Enters and chases it away And saves me from drowning In my lonely tears Nothing ever happens unless first a Dream - Rod |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big hugggssssssss) Sooooooo sad but beautiful, sweet friend, I hope now you wake up to the morning light with love in your arms close to your heart and now you cry with tears of joy! (sigh) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is fabulous! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Rodney, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
This is so beautifully written, Rodney and so very romantic...almost magical! I loved it a lot! copyright2002 Lyra Nesius |
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sodpossom Senior Member
since 2001-06-15
Posts 723N.C |
Beautiful imagery and write!Very nice! |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* this is so heartfelt and so beautifully said...*sigh* I love the way it flows with all the love your heart feels for her. Lucky lady she is to have one love her like this. **big hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Rodney, it must be coming up to Valentine's Day there are so many romantic poems here. I love the softness and yearning in this one. Keth Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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