Open Poetry #18 |
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The Jackal Member
since 1999-08-13
Posts 426Springfield, Massachusetts U.S.A |
a little privacy if you please this jar is leaking everything for the life of me I cant find the hole and im always catching myself on every corner twitching and aching for words the bruises do catch up to you they own you because your legal im not afraid to be thrown up just an actor in a play everyone forgot to attend yet they sent me they send me messages that they approved of the final act and im not coming back i want to wake your mother tell her that i love her kick the door down 37 empty rooms the last time i feel 37 empathy and rooms no longer afraid of the dark |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
John, interesting write with strong images. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
"the bruises do catch up to you hey own you" and more... a lot of deep thoughts here taken in many ways by me. M |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Everyone's been bruised, it's part of life catching up to us as is the healing process. Interesting poem! |
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