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Mistletoe Angel
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0 posted 2002-01-24 03:13 PM


Ascending
By: Noah Eaton
1/24/02

Hello, my love, we meet at last
I’ve been charmed by this spell you have cast
I never thought I’d find you
With all these fading memories
I still struggle to find a melody
Show me if your love is true

Ever since you have come to me
I am free
From this litany
I will sing
With arms wide open
We will embrace each day
Your love feels so right
I am in flight
Ascending…

In times where I wanted to fly away
Oh, now you have convinced me to stay
You have lifted me higher
I can’t afford to let you go
You have brought heaven to my soul
You have fulfilled my desires

Ever since you have come to me
I am free
From this litany
I will sing
With arms wide open
We will embrace each day
Your love feels so right
I am in flight
Ascending…

I just want to hold you close…
I just want to hold you close…
Ascend with me now to the heavens
Don’t let me go…

Ever since you have come to me
I am free
From this litany
I will sing
With arms wide open
We will embrace each day
Your love feels so right
I am in flight
Ascending…

I'll braid your hair with the stars
I'll share with you the sunshine
Soar with me upon the clouds
We'll always share this love divine...

I just want to hold you close…
I just want to hold you close…
Don't let me go…



[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (01-24-2002 03:15 PM).]

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1 posted 2002-01-24 03:15 PM


Congratulations Sweet Noah! A charming post from our little lighthouse of love and light!
Silver Streak
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2 posted 2002-01-24 03:36 PM


Wonderful poem for your 5,000th. Congratulatons, Noah. God bless you as you post your next 5000.
-newell

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Copyright: 2002 Newell Elsworth Usher

Victoria
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3 posted 2002-01-24 03:38 PM


Congratulations hon..keep writing..we all love you

               ~Vic

You can complain because roses have thorns, or you can rejoice because thorns have roses.

                                                -Ziggy

Suetang
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4 posted 2002-01-24 03:38 PM


Hello Noah
Congratulations on such a wonderful achievement.  I know how dedicated you are to Passions and the people who are a part of it and I want to thank you for all your encouragement and kindness that you have afforded to me, I'll be forever grateful.
This was a beautiful admission of love to your very special someone.
Take care my friend......Sue

Suetang

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5 posted 2002-01-24 03:55 PM



A wonderful achievement sweet Noah!
I am so proud of you...
I look forward to many many more of your beautiful posts!
~Hugs to you today and everyday! Nancy~


~Time has cast a spell on you,
  So you won't ever forget me~

[This message has been edited by Enchantress (01-24-2002 03:59 PM).]

Martie
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6 posted 2002-01-24 04:03 PM


Congratulations, Noah!  

"I'll braid your hair with the stars
I'll share with you the sunshine
Soar with me upon the clouds
We'll always share this love divine..."

What beautful love thoughts you write!

Saunni
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7 posted 2002-01-24 04:30 PM


Noah, you just amaze me with your wonderful words, you are so full of love, My Friend! Congrats on 5000.

Sauni @~~~>~~

The Sun Shines
Not On Us, But In Us
The River Flows Not Past,
But Through Us

ellie LeJeune
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8 posted 2002-01-24 05:23 PM


Oh, Noah; What an incredibly romatic poem to celebrate your 5,000 post! "CONGRATULATIONS" This is my chance to thank you for all the times you have respnded so lovingly to my poems and encouraged my writing...God Bless your wonderful loving heart! Hugs, Ellie

A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails.

Charisma
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9 posted 2002-01-24 05:42 PM


*wow* what a way to celebrate your milestone.....your love shines all over these blue pages.....Congratulations on 5000th and hope to see many more from you dear Noah

(((hugs)))
Charisma

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10 posted 2002-01-24 06:10 PM


You, my sweet boy, must have the fastest computer ever!
Didn't we just see 4000?  

congratulations, Noah.

Kathleen--(Kay)
A true friend does not love you for who you are, but in spite of who you are." -- Caroline Tran

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11 posted 2002-01-24 06:13 PM


WOW Noah, didn't you just turn your 4000th, How do you do it all. As usual this is a most beautiful poem to cross over to the 5000. CONGRATULATIONS      floria

Floria

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But die with all their music in them"
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12 posted 2002-01-24 07:05 PM


Noah Dear,

5000??? wow, what an accomplishment. This is a lovely way to mark 5000.

Startime
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13 posted 2002-01-24 07:27 PM


this is the perfect poem to celebrate your 5000th post...congradulations....**big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

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14 posted 2002-01-24 08:36 PM


wow baby, this could be a song, I love it.
damn 5000 already! I still havent made it to 2000 LOL. slow down let me catch up heheheh
(hugs) keep these beauties coming


RP

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15 posted 2002-01-24 08:53 PM


Congratulations Noah my friend....5000th post, quite an accomplishment.And a great poem to bring in this record!!!
sodpossom
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16 posted 2002-01-24 08:58 PM


Congrats on quite a milestone with this true beauty!
Rodney Belcher
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17 posted 2002-01-24 09:16 PM


This was truly beautiful and I congratulate you too on this milestone acheivement! Thanks for all of your kind words and know that we all treasure you here!...Rod

Nothing ever happens unless first a Dream - Rod

Tracey
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18 posted 2002-01-24 09:17 PM


Oh Noah, I had gone to pick out some of my favourite lines from this piece…but there were just too many. This is absolutely gorgeous. I think it is my favourite poem by you…such a fitting one to share your 5,000th post by the way. And many congratulations on that. Besides the fact that your poetry is always wonderful, you have some of the most heartfelt responses to the poetry of others that I have seen on these pages.

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

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19 posted 2002-01-24 09:22 PM


Yes the power og love can make you feel like you've never felt before huh?  My, your 5,000th post, I wish i had that many.  Congrats on your milestone, I am proud of you.  And such a great poem to make your 5,000th, great job Noah!

    From your good friend
       Randy Meador

a life lived unexplored is a life not worth living.

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20 posted 2002-01-24 10:03 PM


Excellent writing Noah...hope love works out for you and the one you love...James
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21 posted 2002-01-25 11:18 PM


Congratulations on 5000, Noah...
I don't know how I missed this one...
It is very beautiful.
You are a very gifted poet!

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

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22 posted 2002-01-26 12:22 PM


Noah,
Forevermore, you are leaving me in the dust. Star dust that is. Holy cow, you have been busy. A lofty 5,000th post poem it is indeed. Thanks for all your support...you are so faithful and I appreciate it. Way to go. I'm thinking that at this pace you'll catch up to Marge in no time. Larry C

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23 posted 2002-01-26 10:37 AM


Awesome poem, Noah. Write on!!
Sandra

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24 posted 2002-01-26 01:32 PM


Noah,wonderful poem for your 5000th post!


CONGRATULATIONS!




Juanita

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25 posted 2002-01-27 10:37 PM


WOW! Congratulations Sweet Noah, what a lovely poem to celebrate.  Thank you for all the kindness and sweetness you add to the forums too, you definitely our our "Ambassador of Love" on Passions, great job!

<font face="monotype corsiva">~*  Carpe' Diem  *~

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26 posted 2002-01-27 10:42 PM


Now that you have found her, I hope she'll never let you go.  
You write your heart so well Noah.  
Congrats on the big 5!


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27 posted 2002-01-27 10:51 PM


Noah darling boy this is utterly utterly superb, this is surely your best work ever the lines are so beautiful YOU are such an asset to Passions, always replying always faithful. Truly well done darling boy.

CONGRATULATIONS
5 0 0 0


I did tell you that I really do love this one didn’t I? Good because I do!!


Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy


To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1


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28 posted 2002-01-27 10:56 PM


~~Noah~~
this is a wonderful pecie so much love and joy is seen in this poem i hope you stay in flight as long as you can stay up i loved it
*wink*wink*

~~~Gaurdurthoughts~~~
"the best and most beautiful things cannot be seen,or even touched. they must be felt with the heart"

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