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Sunset and Shadows
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Sunset and Shadows |
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Enchanted Melody New Member
since 2002-01-26
Posts 8NSW Australia |
In the sunset shadows played With dusky colors of the receeding day And the salty winds carried your sigh Reminiscing of times gone by On the sand we sat together Forming memories that last forever And as we watched the sun's dying rays I looked at you and remembered Another time - another place I heard your laugh and felt your smile Saw that spark of joy in your eyes I caught the glance I knew so well And remembered our secrets we'd never tell But too soon the moment ended So fleetingly did it pass Too many changes had Time rendered We cannot live in the past But I'll always remember that day And your laughter and your ways 'Neath the sunset where shadows played In that time - in the place |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Enchanted Melody, Welcome to Passions and what an enchanting poem you have made you debut with. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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brianbeaudry Member
since 2001-07-20
Posts 410Northern Ontario Canada |
Welcome to Passions.....I love this poem...beautiful imagery and gently emotional...hope to see more of your work!! |
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Enchanted Melody New Member
since 2002-01-26
Posts 8NSW Australia |
Thank you for the warm welcome Kethry and Brian  ....but I have to admit, I'm not that new to Passions, just changed my username, hehe..... best wishes!! |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Not that new? LOL...well, then, write on! |
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sodpossom Senior Member
since 2001-06-15
Posts 723N.C |
Well since you are not that new I want welcome you,but I will compliment you on the wonderful imagery.Very nice! |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) BRAVO!!! I LOVE IT!!! Oh Mary, this is sooooooooo gorgeous, sweet friend, this is a fabulous debut from your golden heart! (smiles) May these sweet memories always shine in your heart and may many more sunny days like this fill your future! I LOVE IT!!! Welcome to Passions, sweet Mary, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* tender memories that caress the heart so softly...This is beautiful...you may not go back but you can make new memories like this...**big hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
How enchanting! I really like the imagery and feelings of fond memories washing over me as I read this. Welcome back... |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Well whoever you are. I still like this and welcome back. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
This is lovely....and welcome back then! ~Hugs, Nancy~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
How absolutely beautiful this was, and I have been waiting to read some work of yours, and I am glad that I waited and watched. Just lovely as usual. <font face="monotype corsiva">~* Carpe' Diem *~ |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
I love it and I love ur poem....I contimplate a name change for myself but nahhhhh rosepetal is just fine. |
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