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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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not often do I admire jewelry when worn by a woman to distract the eye from the natural of subtle and round until now that is those simple beads glistening exotic god shaped gems carfully placed to seperate the longing of my eyes from the willing of your secret gifts that are offered with embarassed glance those beads of desire that moisten satin skin ©Dark |
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sodpossom Senior Member
since 2001-06-15
Posts 723N.C |
Very vivid and well written!Nice job! |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Sensuous images DS..pearls of desire  ~Victoria~ You can complain because roses have thorns, or you can rejoice because thorns have roses. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
thanx sir, I appreciate the review |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms V, thank you for your read |
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The Jackal Member
since 1999-08-13
Posts 426Springfield, Massachusetts U.S.A |
really liked this one,especially this part "until now that is those simple beads glistening exotic god shaped gems carfully placed to seperate" i think its perfect,great work no longer afraid of the dark |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Thank you my friend |
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A Tone of Voice Member
since 2001-07-18
Posts 287 |
hmmmmm, now this curves in the right places~! enjoyed Atov |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
thank you ATOV |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
DS...I have a black opal I wear most of the time, not to distract, but to enhance. Enjoyed your poem! |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
lovely I imagine the contrast of dark to pale? thank you |
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Greeneyes 
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
not often does one such as you come along...to fill our eyes with your treasure of words....  Lauren~ Twas not into my ears you whispered |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
DS, it was a pleasure to read this treasure Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Zinsser Senior Member
since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641Calif. |
very well done...... enjoyed |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Lauren, thank you sweet lady for your reading and replies. Kethry, am pleased to be a good read on this, thank you Zinsser, arrigoto my friend |
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Casidy Junior Member
since 2002-01-27
Posts 36The Heart of Texas |
wow, I could almost see you looking at them... very nice imagery... very lovely piece... more please. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
OH MY!!! This is....this is....soooo very well done! YES!! ~Hugs......more please!?~ *Nancy looks away quickly...rather embarrassed.* ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
very sensual thoughts, I love it, don't wear much jewelry but the way you've written this I may start! Kathleen--(Kay) |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
DAMN!! (OOPS! sorry...that was my first reaction.... )very sensual..very nice...great imagery...much enjoyed...!! hugs, g ~dgvarner/fallen rain~ "and i'd give up forever to touch you..cause i know you can feel me somehow..." -googoo dolls [This message has been edited by dgvarner (01-27-2002 06:07 PM).] |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Casidy, Thank you for your gentle review Enchantress, it is a pleasure to blush you slightly Ms Rose, and to you a rose with hungry eyes to view your gems DGvarner, I kiss the damn from your finger lips...thank you |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Dark, You know I like this *sighs*Hugs, Tara "My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read" |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Ms Tara...I wait for your visits and worship your comments...thank you so much |
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