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John Yaws
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since 1999-10-09
Posts 860
Texas

0 posted 2002-01-27 10:06 PM



I was driving down the road today-
And watching miles roll by.
The sun above was burning holes,
Across a clear blue sky...

My mind went drifting back I guess-
To younger, dumber days...
To back when I was punching cows,
Out Arizona way.

I've seen the Painted Desert-
And the wild Mojave, too.
The sky a burnished dome of white-
Too hot to show it's blue.

The Superstition Mountains-
The mighty Tonto Rim...
Apache ghosts were known to ride,
Through evening shadows, dim.

I'd like to turn the hands of time,
Back to those simple days...
When worries never crossed my mind
Nor sorrow crossed my ways.

But memories mean more to me-
Than money, don't you see...
For when I ride that mystic range,
My heart is wild and free.

© Copyright 2002 John R. Yaws - All Rights Reserved
Morcastlin
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since 2002-01-14
Posts 244
The Jersey Shore, USA
1 posted 2002-01-27 10:32 PM


Applause!!!! This is just an awesome poem!!!!
I love all of the vivid detail and the last line was a perfect closing! Well done!

Love,
Bonnie

Irish Rose
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since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263

2 posted 2002-01-28 06:44 PM


Yes!  What a great feeling and a great story. Thank you!

Kathleen--(Kay)
A true friend does not love you for who you are, but in spite of who you are." -- Caroline Tran

Startime
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since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918
Canada
3 posted 2002-01-28 06:56 PM


*sigh* memories are a precious and rare treasures kept safely in the heart where they are forever filled with magic. **big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Mistletoe Angel
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4 posted 2002-01-28 06:58 PM




YAY!!! Oh John, this is wonderful, I just love the fabulous words you write! (big huggggssss) Memories are priceless, and as we always cherish them, we will find freedom to ourselves and rise forth with joy and prowess for more to come! (smiles) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is fantastic! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet John, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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