Open Poetry #18 |
think of me |
arthur Senior Member
since 2001-08-14
Posts 678england |
Go to the shorewhere the sea laps bright. Wait by the rock for the end of night. Look East for that first coil of light. Before things of day are yet to be Yet night has quitely slipped away Be still now:And think of me Arthur |
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Gothkitty Junior Member
since 2001-02-05
Posts 32Australia |
Very nice a pleasure to read |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* simply beautiful. **big hugs** Gentle romance fills these words. Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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whiskey
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia |
Lovely I enjoyed it alot, very romantic Julie |
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Soleil Noir Senior Member
since 2001-12-19
Posts 688USA |
A quiet entreaty...easy enough to follow. I belive I will... |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
very cool...enjoyed..! hugs, g ~dgvarner/fallen rain~ |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
This moved me greatly for some odd reason... My perception of truth will somehow never quite be the same..and so I write. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Michael, you conjured up an image in my mind of a woman sitting quite alone on this rock, looking out to the sea...hoping, waiting patiently. I really enjoyed this one. One of your best yet, in my opinion. Write on love. Hugs across the pond, Nancy ~* A dream is a wish your heart makes... *~ |
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Hypnosis Member
since 2001-12-02
Posts 325CO |
This was very beautifully written. It was also very romantic, I couldn'y think of anyone who could resist! Randy Meador a life lived unexplored is a life not worth living. |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Well writeen, indeed. It painted a very nice word picture for me |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoy |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(sigh) Soooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, may the lighthouse of your heart reflect to the love of your life and lead her to your heart forever with loves bliss! (big hugggssssss) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is beautiful! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet arthur, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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