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A Tone of Voice
Member

since 2001-07-18

Posts 287

0 posted 2002-01-02 05:04 PM

The memories are like echoes
Trapped in a stillness
I can recall the names of
The participants who wove
The web, but the faces are vague, dreams
Dancing across the tip of a tongue
Sometimes I lie in dark places unable to
Contain the voices or visions reminding
Me fate is an entanglement
presented aesthetically.
For a celebrated span the illusion was accessible,
We gazed into decorative eyes exposing the other’s reflection, and love was foolish,
but it wasn’t blind.
We knew soul mates and ever after's
didn’t exist, but for a while
we pretended as if they did.

Jamie
Member Elite

since 2000-06-26

Posts 3168
Blue Heaven

1 posted 2002-01-02 05:09 PM

Very nicely done.. enjoyed the tone of accepted inevitability.

There is society where none intrudes, by the deep sea, and music in its roar.
byron

Victoria

Member Ascendant

since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

2 posted 2002-01-02 05:20 PM

Love is foolish but isnt blind..so true my friend...hugss..
nice to see you here..

~Victoria~

"To love and be loved is to feel the sun from both sides."
~ David Viscott

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

3 posted 2002-01-02 05:38 PM

This is an interesting read, and I am going to enjoy seeing more of your work...

Welcome to Passions!

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

4 posted 2002-01-02 07:40 PM

(sigh) Soul mates may sound like such a mysterious and mundane concept sometimes, but I believe once love is found and is real, the joy and bliss of being with that person forever feels so right! (kiss on cheek) I love it, sweet friend, this is very thought-provoking! You have such a beautfiul heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

5 posted 2002-01-02 10:54 PM

I've always wondered why we pretend. . .

well done. . . there's a lot of emotion here. . . and a lot from the heart. . . welcome. . .

-------------------------------------------------------

To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

6 posted 2002-01-02 10:58 PM

Wonderfully penned! I must have missed your entrance to Passions.
So...Welcome!
I will be looking forward to more of your work!
~Hugs, Nancy~

~* A dream is a wish your heart makes... *~

Ivy Rose
Senior Member

since 2001-12-29

Posts 1300
MA, USA

7 posted 2002-01-02 11:47 PM

This has a very subtle, unique message to it. There is an intensity underlying its fluid words. I really liked the uniqueness of your voice. ***Ivy Rose

A Tone of Voice
Member

since 2001-07-18

Posts 287

8 posted 2002-01-03 10:10 PM

Jamie, Victoria, Sunshine, Mistletoe Angel, Sven, Enchantress, Ivy Rose....

I want to thank all of you for reading and taking the time to respond, I appreciate it very much~! sincerely,

*S*

Atov

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