. . . Pure instinct . . . Haiku

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Open Poetry #18

. . . Pure instinct . . . Haiku

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

0 posted 2002-01-03 11:43 AM

fish swimming upstream
pure instinct the driving force
the eggs shall be laid

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

[This message has been edited by Interloper (01-03-2002 01:02 PM).]

Startime
Member Ascendant

since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

1 posted 2002-01-03 11:48 AM

This makes me think of salmon and their struggle to get upstream. BRAVO!!! I love the vision I saw from this poem. **big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

arthur
Senior Member

since 2001-08-14

Posts 678
england

2 posted 2002-01-03 12:02 PM

we , and they, are driven by the most basic of needs
arthur

Soleil Noir
Senior Member

since 2001-12-19

Posts 688
USA

3 posted 2002-01-03 12:11 PM

My mind thought "born" instead
of "bare"...but both work...

Thank you.

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

4 posted 2002-01-03 01:02 PM

makes me want to go fishing

craigrk
Member

since 2001-12-23

Posts 123

5 posted 2002-01-03 01:11 PM

Haiku is great for the head as was this one. thanks.

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

6 posted 2002-01-03 07:40 PM

(smiles) Soooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, your words paint beautiful images of nature! (smiles) May these fish forever spawn and bring new life to all the waters! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

7 posted 2002-01-03 08:19 PM

Good one Interloper...did I tell you I love these?
Oh...okay.
~Hugs, Nancy~

~* A dream is a wish your heart makes... *~

strbbux
Member Elite

since 2001-12-19

Posts 3859

8 posted 2002-01-03 08:23 PM

Oh, nice haiku, makes me want to do one again. it's been awhile. floria

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