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RosePetal
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0 posted 2002-01-24 09:48 PM


The moment will come
When I can gaze in your eyes
Never had I a special someone
To heat me within, freeze me outside

I fall for you over and over
Like the fluttering of leaves
I inhale the aroma of heaven
Each and every time you breathe

You're always right behind me
My moonshine beam
Baby, you can always find me
Invading your sweetest dreams

There were times you weren't by my side
And we had our share common problems
It was then I felt so hollow inside
But your warm smile always solved them

You are everything I'll ever need
Everything I've ever seeked
My hunger for love you feed
That's why my heart is yours to keep

© Copyright 2002 Joanna - All Rights Reserved
Mistletoe Angel
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1 posted 2002-01-24 09:52 PM




(showers you with kisses) Ooohhhhhhh...you are sooooooo romantic, I love you soooooo much and you to me is everything I've ever dreamed of and wanted to, I love you, I love you, I love you! (kiss on lips) This is sooooooo gorgeous, sweet friend, you will always be singing in my dreams! (kiss on lips) I love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, my love, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton
(Your Singing Sparrow)




[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (01-24-2002 09:54 PM).]

JamesMichael
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2 posted 2002-01-24 09:54 PM


Nice and romantic Rose Petal...James
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3 posted 2002-01-24 09:54 PM


Its seems you have found a true love Joanna, and I could'nt be happier for you.  And these problems you two share, you will find to be things that just strengthen your relationship each time around.  I loved this poem Joanna, it was just so romantic!!

    From your friend
       Randy Meador

a life lived unexplored is a life not worth living.

Enchantress
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4 posted 2002-01-24 09:55 PM


Beautiful Joanna....just like you!
I think you had a special someone in mind when you wrote this.
~Hugs, Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
  So you won't ever forget me~

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5 posted 2002-01-24 10:03 PM


It takes a special woman to say "you are all I'll ever need" to someone. That makes you SPECIAL!!
Tracey
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6 posted 2002-01-24 10:08 PM


Joanna, this is such a sweet tender expression of love. How wonderful for you both.

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

Startime
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7 posted 2002-01-24 10:36 PM


*sigh* so romantically tender...I love the forces of love and what they have done for you. **big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

doreen peri
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8 posted 2002-01-24 10:38 PM


i felt like this once...

and i still do........

lovely writing!!!!!

Domzi
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9 posted 2002-01-25 01:08 PM


AWWW! I love
this poem! It
is so romantic!
I can tell that
it was written from
your heart.

Poetry is spiritual ventilation!

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10 posted 2002-01-25 02:15 PM


Joanna~

How precious a love....   Lovely write, of romance and time....


Lauren~


Twas not into my ears you whispered
but into my heart.
Twas not my lips you kissed,
but my soul

[This message has been edited by Greeneyes (01-25-2002 02:16 PM).]

Madame Chipmunk
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11 posted 2002-01-25 02:35 PM


So very beautiful and romantic, Joanna.
I hope this is about you and I hope its for real.

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

Victoria
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12 posted 2002-01-25 03:13 PM


well i can noah loves it very sweet joanna

               ~Vic

You can complain because roses have thorns, or you can rejoice because thorns have roses.

                                                -Ziggy

strbbux
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13 posted 2002-01-25 03:16 PM


Rose petal. This is so romantic,"My moonshine beam" I love this line, A beautiful poem. floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

Jesse Jaymz
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14 posted 2002-01-25 03:22 PM


hun
*huggles*  great poem.  this peice touched my heart.  i have spoken this poem lots of times.  wonderful hun. *hugs*  
love ya
jesse

So tonight I'll ask
The stars above
"How can I ever win your love?"
What can I do,
What can I say
To turn your angel eyes my way...

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