Open Poetry #18 |
Forces of Love |
RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
The moment will come When I can gaze in your eyes Never had I a special someone To heat me within, freeze me outside I fall for you over and over Like the fluttering of leaves I inhale the aroma of heaven Each and every time you breathe You're always right behind me My moonshine beam Baby, you can always find me Invading your sweetest dreams There were times you weren't by my side And we had our share common problems It was then I felt so hollow inside But your warm smile always solved them You are everything I'll ever need Everything I've ever seeked My hunger for love you feed That's why my heart is yours to keep |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(showers you with kisses) Ooohhhhhhh...you are sooooooo romantic, I love you soooooo much and you to me is everything I've ever dreamed of and wanted to, I love you, I love you, I love you! (kiss on lips) This is sooooooo gorgeous, sweet friend, you will always be singing in my dreams! (kiss on lips) I love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, my love, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton (Your Singing Sparrow) [This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (01-24-2002 09:54 PM).] |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice and romantic Rose Petal...James |
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Hypnosis Member
since 2001-12-02
Posts 325CO |
Its seems you have found a true love Joanna, and I could'nt be happier for you. And these problems you two share, you will find to be things that just strengthen your relationship each time around. I loved this poem Joanna, it was just so romantic!! From your friend Randy Meador a life lived unexplored is a life not worth living. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautiful Joanna....just like you! I think you had a special someone in mind when you wrote this. ~Hugs, Nancy~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
It takes a special woman to say "you are all I'll ever need" to someone. That makes you SPECIAL!! |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
Joanna, this is such a sweet tender expression of love. How wonderful for you both. If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* so romantically tender...I love the forces of love and what they have done for you. **big hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
i felt like this once... and i still do........ lovely writing!!!!! |
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Domzi Member
since 2001-09-08
Posts 288New York (BK) |
AWWW! I love this poem! It is so romantic! I can tell that it was written from your heart. Poetry is spiritual ventilation! |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Joanna~ How precious a love.... Lovely write, of romance and time.... Lauren~ Twas not into my ears you whispered but into my heart. Twas not my lips you kissed, but my soul [This message has been edited by Greeneyes (01-25-2002 02:16 PM).] |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
So very beautiful and romantic, Joanna. I hope this is about you and I hope its for real. copyright2002 Lyra Nesius |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
well i can noah loves it very sweet joanna ~Vic You can complain because roses have thorns, or you can rejoice because thorns have roses. |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Rose petal. This is so romantic,"My moonshine beam" I love this line, A beautiful poem. floria Floria |
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Jesse Jaymz Senior Member
since 2000-01-24
Posts 708Youngstown, ohio |
hun *huggles* great poem. this peice touched my heart. i have spoken this poem lots of times. wonderful hun. *hugs* love ya jesse So tonight I'll ask |
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