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Transfixed (Inspired by Brianbeaudry)
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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A poem inspired by Brianbeaudry's beautiful write "Enchanted Night" The night has cast, transfixed its spell. I rest beneath its glowing lights, caressed by thoughts that captivate, from gaze of blue that warms, ignites. The maze of you reveals to one, connecting souls awash in myst. Nakedthoughts in silent speak, the darkness loud, in dreams' resist. Each breeze that flows to cradled arms, shadows one, to fall within. Enchanted, I, by all your charms that reign as moonlight settles in. Lost in thought of crescent moon. In wait of full, returning soon. Maureen **with thanks to Bb** for inspiring me so. "For it was not into my ear you whispered, but into my heart. |
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brianbeaudry Member
since 2001-07-20
Posts 410Northern Ontario Canada |
I beem with pride knowing that one of my poems inspired the beauty of this verse!! There is nothing like the brilliance and mystery of the night sky to inspire emotion. I'll include my poem in this responce so others can see the birth of yours. Enchanting Night Sweet blanket of the night bring star's caress to sight Vastness, hold fast my gaze infinities of your maze Naked skies reveal the flight of cosmos awash in light Mystical voices listen, hark! loud silence of the dark Evening breeze hold me nigh in dreams of nocturnal sky Bright luminosity of moon cradle gently my swoon As I fall in shadowed arms enchanted by your charms Brian Beaudry |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Both poems are very lovely..enjoyed them both..   ~Victoria~ You can complain because roses have thorns, or you can rejoice because thorns have roses. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
I echo Victoria on this...both poems are very beautiful... |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
~V and Magnus..I love when a poem touches me..and words begin to flow in want to respond..thank you both and the thanks really goes to Brian for inspiring me today. hugss Maureen "For it was not into my ear you whispered, but into my heart. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  YAY!!! (smiles) Oh my gosh, both your dazzling poem and Brian's gorgeous poem are soooooooo beautiful, the magic of the night reflects from both your hearts! (kiss on cheek) I love this so much, sweet friend, your words are so inspiring and lovely, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Maureen, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Very beautiful Maureen, the last few lines were wonderful as was the entire poem.. lovely. floria |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Very beautiful Maureen....hugs, Nancy. ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Chanson Senior Member
since 2000-08-19
Posts 1559Up Creek w/Out Paddle |
So pretty, and Brian's also. Both poems compliment each other. *s |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
It is so wonderful to be inspired by someone. This is a very well written piece, Maureen. Kathleen--(Kay) |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Noah...many times I am inspired by the words of others..and felt ready to post one, Thank you. Floria...I enjoyed Brian's words enough to have them become part of mine. Nancy...glad you liked it. chanson...thank you..some days I need the inspiration to let loose. This was one of those days. Kathleen...yes, I use to always be inspired, now it isn't as frequent but I enjoy it just the same. *s My thanks to ALL Maureen |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
Enchanting write, nicely done! your elixir is ready... |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Thank you Martin, I have tasted your elixir of words..*s M |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* stunning...absolutely stunning. I love both this poem and the one that inspired it...filled with the magic of love and a night sky of stars. **big hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Both the inspiration and your beautiful response capture a magical moment. So enchanting, so lyrical. |
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sodpossom Senior Member
since 2001-06-15
Posts 723N.C |
I'm going to have to be original here and say,this was really beautiful! |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Maureen...This is a lovely inspired poem. Beautiful in imagery and intent. Thank you to both of you for inspiring me. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Karen... *the magic of love and a night sky of stars*. ...yes that is exactly what inspired me *s thank you. Midnitesun...I am pleased you enjoyed thank you. M sodpossom..that's fine, Ilike "original" *s Martie..and we both thank you for reading *s Maureen |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
The maze of you reveals to one, connecting souls awash in myst. Nakedthoughts in silent speak, the darkness loud, in dreams' resist. Absolutely gorgeous, Maureen...and a beautiful complement to Brian's poem which is also a beautiful poem... (its amazing how that word keeps popping up) Kudos to two terrific poets!  copyright2002 Lyra Nesius |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Lyra..thank you so much for your kind replies Always, Maureen [This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (01-25-2002 03:27 PM).] |
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