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brianbeaudry
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0 posted 2002-01-24 09:40 PM


Knight

Each mighty blow he lands
Retreats his enemy’s stance
Truth’s light directs his hand
To beat back his foe’s lance
Another strike does resound
The battle’s now been won
His adversary hits the ground
Believing his life is done
The knight strips him of arm
Then offers him his hand
Promising of no further harm
While helping him to stand
On bent knee he offers praise
To God’s strengthening Light
Battles won are but first phase
Of being the victor of this fight
The second part is setting free
His adversary's beaten soul
In forgiving heart let him see
That strength can mean console
The true victor of any fight
Is one that heeds heart's call
What turns a victor into a Knight
Is compassion after the fall

Brian Beaudry


© Copyright 2002 Brian Beaudry - All Rights Reserved
Rodney Belcher
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1 posted 2002-01-24 09:43 PM


Very nice...good moral...thanks for sharing...Rod

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2 posted 2002-01-24 09:46 PM




BRAVO!!! Oh Brian, such chivalry and compassion always fills your wonderful words, sweet friend, a true knight always is loyal to all his loved ones and will never let his heart down with purity he has! (big hugggsssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, this is soooooo beautiful, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Brian, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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3 posted 2002-01-24 10:08 PM


Brian...EXCELLENT MESSAGE TO THIS POEM. Well-written, my dear Meadow friend.  ***Ivy Rose
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4 posted 2002-01-24 10:11 PM


The true victor of any fight
Is one that heeds heart's call
What turns a victor into a Knight
Is compassion after the fall
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Yes Brian...well done and I believe your closing sums it all up...well done!
~Hugs, Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
  So you won't ever forget me~

Startime
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5 posted 2002-01-24 10:32 PM


I LOVE IT!!! I LOVE IT!!!! ABSOLUTELY PERFECT POEM WITH SUCH A BRAIN MESSAGE IN IT. **big big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

strbbux
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6 posted 2002-01-24 10:53 PM


Brian such a wonderful poem. Compassion is such a beautiful word. floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

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