Open Poetry #18 |
Knight |
brianbeaudry Member
since 2001-07-20
Posts 410Northern Ontario Canada |
Knight Each mighty blow he lands Retreats his enemy’s stance Truth’s light directs his hand To beat back his foe’s lance Another strike does resound The battle’s now been won His adversary hits the ground Believing his life is done The knight strips him of arm Then offers him his hand Promising of no further harm While helping him to stand On bent knee he offers praise To God’s strengthening Light Battles won are but first phase Of being the victor of this fight The second part is setting free His adversary's beaten soul In forgiving heart let him see That strength can mean console The true victor of any fight Is one that heeds heart's call What turns a victor into a Knight Is compassion after the fall Brian Beaudry |
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Rodney Belcher Member
since 2000-06-06
Posts 227Taylor, Michigan |
Very nice...good moral...thanks for sharing...Rod Nothing ever happens unless first a Dream - Rod |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
BRAVO!!! Oh Brian, such chivalry and compassion always fills your wonderful words, sweet friend, a true knight always is loyal to all his loved ones and will never let his heart down with purity he has! (big hugggsssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, this is soooooo beautiful, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Brian, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Ivy Rose Senior Member
since 2001-12-29
Posts 1300MA, USA |
Brian...EXCELLENT MESSAGE TO THIS POEM. Well-written, my dear Meadow friend. ***Ivy Rose |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
The true victor of any fight Is one that heeds heart's call What turns a victor into a Knight Is compassion after the fall ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Yes Brian...well done and I believe your closing sums it all up...well done! ~Hugs, Nancy~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
I LOVE IT!!! I LOVE IT!!!! ABSOLUTELY PERFECT POEM WITH SUCH A BRAIN MESSAGE IN IT. **big big hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Brian such a wonderful poem. Compassion is such a beautiful word. floria Floria |
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