Open Poetry #18 |
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Ladyhawke |
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Ladyhawke Member
since 2001-09-01
Posts 86 |
By evil Queen Fate cursed, And her sister, Destiny, I face a travesty Of near miss... For, to hold the kingdom In our hands, and classic Love realized, First must the spell Be broken Of the Hawke, she flies By day, And he, a Wolf by night. Talons tethered to his Arm, forever kept Close from harm, And by the moon They travel until A warm pillow, His flank becomes, And the gray mane. Until events long Coming, we wait At one another's Side:Until the day The curse be broken, A human man With human bride. |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* oh I simply love it...This is pure magic with fantasy at its very best. BRAVO!!!BRAVO!!!!**big hugs** ![]() Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Rodney Belcher Member
since 2000-06-06
Posts 227Taylor, Michigan |
Nice imagery...I was caught up in it...Rod Nothing ever happens unless first a Dream - Rod |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
![]() ![]() ![]() (smiles) Ooohhhhhhhh...I love it, I love it, this is such a wonderful vision of yourself and the love that shines in your heart, this is beautiful! (kiss on cheek) Your words are always a delight to read, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ladyhawke, thank you for sharing! ![]() ![]() May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
YES!! Love the fantasy of this piece! Well done Ladyhawke! ~Hugs, Nancy~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
What an enchanting, magical piece this is. If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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Midnitesun![]()
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
A well written magical tale. I felt those talons holding tight, and heard a lonely wolf cry at night. 'Fate' can be cruel. |
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