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Landas Luver
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since 2002-01-23
Posts 11


0 posted 2002-01-24 08:57 PM


Since that night at the game,
you canged my life.
When your beautiful face came,
I knew you were just right.
I've got you in my hall of fame,
I check it out every night.
Well Landa all I'm asking you,
is if you'll be my wife.

I think of you, I cherish you,
so every thing should be alright.
I want to hold you more than just a few,
and never let you out of my sight.
When i first saw you I wanted to kiss you,
Oh that would've been so tight.
So baby all I ask of you,
is if you'll be my wife.
Carlos Roman,
January 24,
2002


© Copyright 2002 Landas Luver - All Rights Reserved
Startime
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since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918
Canada
1 posted 2002-01-24 09:01 PM


BRAVO!!!!STANDING OVATION!!!What a perfect entrance you have made. Welcome to Passions. I hope she says YES!! **big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

inot2B
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since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205
Arkansas
2 posted 2002-01-24 09:02 PM


Wow now that is a great first post. Welcome to the family and I hope you get the answer you want.
Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
3 posted 2002-01-24 09:02 PM



Welcome to Passions, Carlos!  Please check your e-mail for a special greeting!

Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...
I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound.


RosePetal
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since 2001-08-26
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South Florida
4 posted 2002-01-24 09:03 PM


Welcome to Passions! I hope she says YES!
I'll keep my fingers crossed for you.
Please check your e-mail for a special greeting from me

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113
Canada eh.
5 posted 2002-01-24 09:05 PM


WELCOME TO PASSIONS!!!
You must let us know what she answers!
*We are a bunch of hopeless, incurable romantics here.*
I look forward to more of your work!
~Hugs, Nancy Lee~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
  So you won't ever forget me~

Irish Rose
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since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263

6 posted 2002-01-24 09:05 PM


aw, Welcome!   Yes, she must say "yes"!

Kathleen--(Kay)
A true friend does not love you for who you are, but in spite of who you are." -- Caroline Tran

Mistletoe Angel
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7 posted 2002-01-24 09:07 PM




(smiles) Oh my gosh, this brought tears to my eyes, you are sooooooo romantic and this is sooooooo beautiful! I hope she says yes, for you deserve the greatest happiness and I know she can't resist the love you share! I LOVE IT!!! Welcome to Passions, sweet Carlos, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! (big hugggssssss) We all love you so mcuh! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Carlos, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Tracey
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since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808
where insanity meets breeding
8 posted 2002-01-24 09:11 PM


Oh, please come back and tell us when she says yes!!! What a lovely way to ask for her hand through your lifes journey. A big welcome to passions to you.

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

Rodney Belcher
Member
since 2000-06-06
Posts 227
Taylor, Michigan
9 posted 2002-01-24 09:20 PM


Very romantic and very suave...you da man!

Nothing ever happens unless first a Dream - Rod

sodpossom
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since 2001-06-15
Posts 723
N.C
10 posted 2002-01-24 09:22 PM


Nice first post and what Rodney said.
Silver Streak
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since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625
FL, USA
11 posted 2002-01-24 09:23 PM


Carlos, welcome and thanks for this beautiful poem
-newell  

Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com

Copyright: 2002 Newell Elsworth Usher

Midnitesun
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Gaia
12 posted 2002-01-24 10:14 PM


Welcome, Carlos, to a warm and cozy Love home. Best wishes on your romantic request!
Landa
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since 2002-02-02
Posts 1

13 posted 2002-02-02 07:27 PM


Carlos,that poem was very beatiful and seriously if u feel the same i feel the same way u do and yes Papi I will marry u hopefully we will be together forever and untill we see eachother again huggz and kisses Holla at me Papi


Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
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Canada eh.
14 posted 2002-02-02 07:38 PM


SHE SAID YES!!
CONGRATULATIONS!!
WOW!! Oh my!  WOW!!
This takes my breath away...I am so happy for you both!
~Hugs and best wishes, Nancy~


*Is this a first for Passions?*

~Time has cast a spell on you,
  So you won't ever forget me~

amusemi
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since 2001-12-08
Posts 1262
A State of Disarray
15 posted 2002-02-02 09:18 PM


Cool beans!!!  Welcome to Passions and congrats!!!
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