Open Poetry #18 |
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Timeless Art of Love.... |
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Magnus![]() ![]()
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA ![]() |
The moon casts a soft shadow upon the land. Distant fireflies twinkle beneath countless stars. Couples walk side by side, bound by warm hand. Looking into the heavens, in search of Mars. A distant light, twinkling bright...a silver sheen. Shining into the eyes of two fallen madly in love. Like Garbo, Gable, Bogey, McCall on screen. Two silhouetted by the stars shimmering above. Minds filled with softness of the still clear night. Lungs savoring freshest air, honeysuckles and dew. Guided toward passion from a moon’s softest light. Two shadows become one as love grows anew. Timeless moments carried down through centuries. Of Gods, Goddesses, Gladiators and sculpted art. A yellow rose blooms to give hope and appease the sadness of loss, lonely songs of the heart. No longer are the days of the caveman’s duress. Gone are the moments of the chivalrous knight. Love’s whispers between two souls caress as a lover’s moon escapes early morning light. |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
You do have the words my dear friend and you use them well. floria |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
![]() ![]() (sigh) Sooooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, may each red rose resemble each true sweetheart and may each yellow rose bring hope to every destined lover. (sigh) I love it, sweet friend, you are sooooooo romantic! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Barry, thank you for sharing! ![]() ![]() ![]() May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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RosePetal![]() ![]()
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
Oh so heavenly! You have a way with words sweetie. (hugs) Happy New Year... p.s. what is your name? I don't want to call you magnus forever, hehehe. Joanna |
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Ivy Rose Senior Member
since 2001-12-29
Posts 1300MA, USA |
Your words are like the magic moments upon a silver screen. Soft, romantic phrasing adds power and passion to this poem. **Ivy Rose |
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Magnus![]() ![]()
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Thank you Floria...it takes work and feelings to have those words...I do believe I have the second one down pat...Lots of feelings.. |
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Magnus![]() ![]()
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Noah...need I say it...You already know... thanx... |
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Magnus![]() ![]()
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Joanna....B A R R Y....tis the name of this man that slays dragons of old. Wearing a shield of tarnished metal and sword of shining steel... Thanx RP.... |
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Magnus![]() ![]()
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Ivy Rose...I will consider that a complement. One that I won't forget soon... Thank You... |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* wow....what can I say...from a dreamer filled with love and romance you paint visions of perfect delight....now about that clone ![]() ![]() Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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catalinamoon![]()
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
This one is so peacefully romantic. A place to aspire to, I believe. Sandra |
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Magnus![]() ![]()
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Yes Karen...Didn't you get the clone I sent to you last month? Should have been there by now.... Oh well...guess I will have to send another one... Thanx Star... |
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Magnus![]() ![]()
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Sandra...YEP..it is just such a place.. Thanx |
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