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kimie
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0 posted 2002-01-24 06:37 PM



Far from here lies my love
in a makeshift graveyard
where dead love go
But memories are still so lively
a constant reminder everytime
I smell a flower
And when I see lovers
I can feel us still
loving each other

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1 posted 2002-01-24 06:48 PM




(tears fall down my cheeks) Oh my gosh, this had me crying, this is so sad but yet so beautiful! (big hugggsssssss) My heart goes out to your lost love, but I know deep down these memories will last forever and your loving heart will love again and you will find more joy soon to last forever, for you deserve the greatest happiness! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is soooooo touching! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kimie, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

cruz
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2 posted 2002-01-24 11:56 PM


nice write!  there's a lot of substance here.  those memories shall never be taken away!  well done.
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