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Larry C
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0 posted 2002-01-24 10:25 PM


Four Words…Not Less (Midnitesun)
By Larry Chadwick

I’ve diagnosed the heat,
My heart is on fire.
It has been warming up,
With a burning desire.

A melt down will not do,
Some heat must dissipate.
I have just four words for you,
STOP ME…I’M SMOKIN’!

January 22, 2002


© Copyright 2002 Larry Chadwick - All Rights Reserved
Midnitesun
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1 posted 2002-01-24 10:42 PM


             

Oh, I'll run out and grab a fire hose
....oh no, it's froze!
Burn, baby, burn.
HAHA. This is a really good one Larry.

Tracey
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2 posted 2002-01-24 10:44 PM


Yeah baby, you’re smokin alright!!! Red Hot...ouch...

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

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3 posted 2002-01-24 10:53 PM


Kacy,
Always glad for the help! Thanks.

Tracey,
Thanks babe!

Enchantress
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Canada eh.
4 posted 2002-01-24 10:57 PM


Hey!  When you're hot you're hot!!

~Time has cast a spell on you,
  So you won't ever forget me~

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5 posted 2002-01-24 10:59 PM


owwwwww hot hot hot
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6 posted 2002-01-24 11:01 PM


HAHAHA Larry this is great..loved it. get the firetrucks out. floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

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7 posted 2002-01-24 11:15 PM


*giggling* you sure burned up the blue pages with this one....hot stuff you are Mr. Larry. **big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

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8 posted 2002-01-24 11:28 PM


Wow, Larry.........All I have to say is

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

Larry C
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9 posted 2002-01-24 11:59 PM


Nancy Lee,
You should know!

RosePetal,
Sizzlin'! Thanks.

floria,
I thought I hear sirens. LOL Thanks.

Karen,
Almost a melt down of blue! LOL Thanks.

Lyra,
Yup, just about that hot! LOL Thanks.

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