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Undone By You...for Tom
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Undone By You...for Tom |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Undone By the look in your eyes By the touch of your hand By the taste of your kiss. Undone By the warmth of your smile By the sound of your laugh By the song in your heart. Undone By the rain on your face By the joy in your play By the wonder of your love. Undone... Undone... |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Paula This was beautiful and very well written. Take care.....Sue Suetang |
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Morcastlin Member
since 2002-01-14
Posts 244The Jersey Shore, USA |
Wonderfully vivid and descriptive! The ending was very appropriate. ;o) Well done! |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
OOPs me thinks you have come undone and it's all Tom's fault..*grin* very well done. **big hugs**  Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
It's something in the air tonight. Don't you just love being in love? Undone...indeed! |
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poetryinmotion Member
since 2002-01-14
Posts 61mass |
hi Paula. what a great poem this is. just wonderful. well written. great read. love Alice |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Paula - lovely and most beautiful writing... BC |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Paula darling sister of my soul, this is sooooooooo incredibly wonderful. I am never disappointed by the artistry and wonder you craft into your poems and this is amazing. This is without doubt one of your utter best Thank you for this wonderful poem it’s utterly utterly wonderful Tom is lucky to have you darling girl amd I'm lucky to have you as my sister Love you lil sis As always Mushy    To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1 |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Paula~ Soooooo good to see you~ You sound so happy~ I love it ! *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
What a beautiful way to be undone. Isn’t love a wonderful feeling? If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (sigh) Soooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, ooohhhhhhh...we're all so happy to see you again, we've all missed you so so much! (big hugggssssss) This is sooooooo romantic, sweet friend, may your heart forever go undone with his love and melt with eternal happiness! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is fabulous! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Paula, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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inot2B Member Elite
since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205Arkansas |
Tom is a lucky man to have you enjoy him so much. |
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Mon Cherie
since 2001-10-31
Posts 922Land of Never-ending Summers |
Paula, this is sooo sweet and romantic! What's more touching than to be undone by the one you love. When your guard is down and you're defenceless, to be emotionally touched by the one you care about. _,,,^.^,,,_ |
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Dusty Rhodes Junior Member
since 2001-10-14
Posts 27 |
Well written and he seems to be a lucky man. Nice read. Dusty |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Oh yes! To be undone like that! Excellent work Paula, good to read you again, take care. It's okay to shoot the moon ~ John Sebastian |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
soooo good to see you, and soooo good to read you again like it very much ((hugs)) Charisma |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Thank you all...its been mmmmmmmarvelous having Tom in my life |
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