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Open Poetry #18

One Moment With You

DayDreamer99
Member

since 2002-01-23

Posts 72

0 posted 2002-01-24 04:19 PM

One Moment With You

I look into your eyes
And begin to fall
Fall from everything that is real
All the hurt and pain
Its gone, I finally feel free
For just a moment
I can tell your soul your feelings
Just by your eyes
But your looking away and its gone
But I'll remember how it felt to get lost in your eyes

By:Tiffany

*a persons eyes is the window to their soul*

Saunni
Senior Member

since 2000-07-11

Posts 1777
West Virginia

1 posted 2002-01-24 04:25 PM

Wow,this is beautiful! I think you said it better then I ever could!

Great write here.

Sauni @~~~>~~

The Sun Shines
Not On Us, But In Us
The River Flows Not Past,
But Through Us

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

2 posted 2002-01-24 08:58 PM

(smiles) Oh Tiffany, this is sooooo gorgeous, your romantic heart always shine sin your gorgeous words! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, may you forever find paradise in his eyes! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Tiffany, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Rodney Belcher
Member

since 2000-06-06

Posts 227
Taylor, Michigan

3 posted 2002-01-24 09:23 PM

Ahh...the bliss of blossoming love...nothing quite like it. Except maybe the comfort of years of loving one person with all your heart...both are what life is about...thanks for this little treasure!...Rod

Nothing ever happens unless first a Dream - Rod

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