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Lapse into sanity
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Lapse into sanity |
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Michael G Senior Member
since 2000-06-25
Posts 579Nashville |
You find yourself looking at windows that filter the glare of winter, how the days seem to bind against shadows of light still posted in silence. The wind brings slight changes to drifts of glistening snow exciting them in a mild dance of dreams for second thoughts begining. Your breathe creates it's own dance upon the paine of glass to which it freezes your life in some far out comprimise of hope. And you swim in your anarchy, not wanting to move foward only to drift in indiference letting second and third chances leave. What passes as hope and sanity is fake, long ago departed dreams that you cannot quite remember but swear you still have the taste. Then along comes the snow, not really cleansing, just a cover letting your fears subside for a bit as the first tear falls, and you breathe. |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
yes, oh yes, as if frozen and you want to move but you can't. I like this very, very much. Kathleen--(Kay) |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Beautiful imaging here, floria Floria |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Soooooooo well-said, sweet friend, you always write such wonderful sentiments and feelings beautifully in your words! We all love you so much, sweet friend, God Bless You! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Michael, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Jenn E Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 589Kelowna, BC, Canada |
How real these words felt to me you will never know..............very beautiful write MG. As Always Jenn E |
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