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Embers of Twilight (20 or less)
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Embers of Twilight (20 or less) |
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His Poet Senior Member
since 2001-12-18
Posts 750 |
The golden embers of twilight kiss the sky with sparks of a setting sun. Cheryl McClellan 1/24/02 |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Ooohhhhhhh...oh my gosh, this is soooooo gorgeous, sweet friend, I love it!!! (kiss on cheek) Your words always make me smile and see such gorgeous visions, thank you so much, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Cheryl, thank you for sharing!  May love and light alwyas shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
The golden embers of twilight kiss the sky with sparks of a setting sun. Beautiful description of life! Thanks, Cheryl.  -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
Cheryl, This is most lovely! Hugs, Ellie A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails. |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Cheryl this couldnt be any sweeter. floria Floria |
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His Poet Senior Member
since 2001-12-18
Posts 750 |
Noah, Your replies always bring a smile to my face. You are so generous and kind in your comments. Many thanks, Cheryl |
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His Poet Senior Member
since 2001-12-18
Posts 750 |
Ellie, so glad you like, Queen of Senyru. Cheryl |
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His Poet Senior Member
since 2001-12-18
Posts 750 |
Newell, Many thanks for reading. Cheryl |
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His Poet Senior Member
since 2001-12-18
Posts 750 |
Floria, how kind you are. Thanks so much. Cheryl |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* I can see it...it is so romantically beautiful. Well written..I love the vision this poem created...**big hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
short and wonderful , well done! |
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sodpossom Senior Member
since 2001-06-15
Posts 723N.C |
Cheryl A very beautiful image! |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
I love this! Take care, Melissa~ "Poetry is not an opinion expressed... |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
twilight...... one of the most beautiful words in the english language... conjuring up images of a full day coming to rest and a new day dawning tomorrow.... you said it so well.... how beautiful this is!!! |
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His Poet Senior Member
since 2001-12-18
Posts 750 |
Startime, Thank you and it's nice to hear that this evoked images for you. That's the beauty of haiku. Cheryl |
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His Poet Senior Member
since 2001-12-18
Posts 750 |
Martin and Steve, Thank you both for reading. Glad you liked. Cheryl |
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His Poet Senior Member
since 2001-12-18
Posts 750 |
Melissa, Merci. Glad you enjoyed. |
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His Poet Senior Member
since 2001-12-18
Posts 750 |
Doreen, your words are appreciated. I love the word "twilight" too. Such a romantic feel to it. Thanks for reading. Cheryl |
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