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HopeS
Member Elite

since 2000-12-22

Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia

0 posted 2002-01-23 06:36 AM

In Unwanted Limbo

Ignored for a reason
What could it be
I search for answers
Perhaps it is me

I’m blaming myself
The limit pushed
Left with my heart
Severely crushed

Heart still remains
In a tearful flow
Silence causing
The cruelest blow

Will silence break
Only time will tell
A heart forgotten
Is an empty shell

In unwanted limbo
I shall descend
My only wish is
For silence to end

Hope© 2002

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

1 posted 2002-01-23 06:41 AM

in a state of limbo..my life...sometimes Hope, the silence is better than the words that would be spoken...

hugss
Maureen

HopeS
Member Elite

since 2000-12-22

Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia

2 posted 2002-01-23 09:29 AM

Thanks for your thoughtful reply Maureen ,
in the case of this poem , its my needing to know "why sudden silence "
Hope

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

3 posted 2002-01-23 10:23 AM

I know that feeling too..but the wondering sometimes does so much emotional damage...is it worth it..I have decided no, it's not. I hope you get the answers you want/need.

M

Alan
Senior Member

since 2000-09-12

Posts 1499
right next door

4 posted 2002-01-24 11:11 AM

I hope you get what you are asking for. Good writing

His Poet
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since 2001-12-18

Posts 750

5 posted 2002-01-24 12:05 PM

Hope, isn't it amazing how powerful a weapon silence can be? You've addressed the hurt in a wonderfully written poem. Cheryl

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

6 posted 2002-01-24 06:09 PM

aw, this is SO sad!

No one should be ignored! ((((((((((((hug)))))))))))))

Kathleen--(Kay)
A true friend does not love you for who you are, but in spite of who you are." -- Caroline Tran

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

7 posted 2002-01-24 06:16 PM

(big hugggssssssss) Oh Hope, this is so sad, my heart cries out to you and your solitude and I pray with all my heart you'll find love and joy to make the silence golden and you can always rest with the beauty of silence! (kiss on cheek) So sad but beautiful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! (BIG HUGGGSSSSSS) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Hope, thank you for sharing!

May love and light alwyas shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (01-24-2002 06:17 PM).]

A Whisper's Caress
Senior Member

since 2000-11-03

Posts 791
on the horizon of a fairytale

8 posted 2002-01-24 07:06 PM

very nicely done.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

9 posted 2002-01-25 05:48 AM

you control it all, go push it, break it, feel it, change it! Just do it!

sodpossom
Senior Member

since 2001-06-15

Posts 723
N.C

10 posted 2002-01-25 11:12 AM

This was kind of sad,but very well written!

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