Open Poetry #18 |
Lessons in Love 101 |
Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
First find a friend to share your heart Soon in sharing, loving starts Tell him all and tell him often In this, all bitterness will soften Hold him close when times are bad Stand together when things get mad Tell him secrets, it shows your trust And don't forget a little lust Hear him speak, take in those words They give freedom to love's birds Commit… I say unto the end But first of all… find a friend. Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
oh yes, I have and isn't it a wonderful feeling? There's absolutely nothing like it in the world. I love this poem, Kethry, this one I print out and keep in my notebook (you don't mind do you ) this is ah, just made my morning.......... love it, love YOU Kathleen--(Kay) |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Ah Kethry, friends are gold. such a heartwarming poem.floria Floria |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Words of wisdom from your heart and cadence kissed pen. Love the promise of this...good to see you here Keth-girlie I'm like a broken record that you can play ... |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Keth darling sister of my heart and holder of my secret soul Oh my I’m stunned with admiration this has got to be one of you utter utter best. Truly the line and flow in this is absolutely excellent. How do you do that darling heart? Always you surpass expectation I'll forgive you for writing soooooooo well and for being beautiful of heart and in person, but only because you deserve it. If you keep writing like this I shall start running out of superlatives and that would never do would it? I think you've just ignited a spark darling heart, I'll be back soon Love and warm stuff As always Mushy To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1 |
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sodpossom Senior Member
since 2001-06-15
Posts 723N.C |
Kethry You are so wise beyond your years.Theres alot of people that could of used this lesson.Very well done and educational! |
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His Poet Senior Member
since 2001-12-18
Posts 750 |
Keth, to have a love that was first a friend is the ultimate mate. That's probably rare since most of us think lust is the absolute first prerequisite but once lust fades, without friendship, there's not much left. Well, enough of my sermon. Nice message. Cheryl |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
so true kethry..yes..first find a friend ..someone whos heart and allegiance is with you..nicely done ~Vic You can complain because roses have thorns, or you can rejoice because thorns have roses. |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
wise words dear Kethry. like it a lot Charisma |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Very very wise words Keth! First be friends and let the love develop into something more....wonderfully said. ~Hugs, Nancy~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Oh Kethry, this is sooooo beautiful, I love it!!! (kiss on cheek) I am so happy, for I have found my first girlfriend and she has everything I dream of to love her forever and me and my RosePetal just fall in love more with each other each day! (sigh) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is gorgeous! I LOVE IT!!! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kethry, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
This poem is beautifully written, Keth...and packed with wisdom. The best marriages usually begin with friendship... My dear husband is also my very best friend! Great job, Keth! copyright2002 Lyra Nesius |
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peppermint35 Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1106Texas, USA |
Oh most wise one.. it's so true!! Once you have the friendship... the rest is like icing on the cake.. a very tasty icing, lmao.. but still... Wonderful write, Keth..!!! Hugs, Pepper |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Ooooh Freiiind, YoooooHoooooo! I have a secret to tell you. Yooo Hooo. Hope I didn't forget that lust thing...where is it? Keth...I neeeeed youuuu! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed your words...James |
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N orth Carolina Girl Senior Member
since 2001-12-04
Posts 962NC,USA |
Kethry,my husband and I were friends before we got married and after 34 years we still are.I`m also glad that I have you for a friend. Love, Juanita |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Kethry, is this a new version of the 60's Free Love 101? LOL, I love the message. Friendship is the foundation. But don't forget the lusty fun! Who hands out the grades for this class? |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
Kethry, Friendship by itself is a most wonderful thing, but having a spouse as your best friend is simply the best of both worlds. Thank you for this most special bit of wisdom. Michael |
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