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Open Poetry #18

carpe noctem

1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2002-01-23 11:39 PM

carpe noctem

seize the night
in its silk like folds
tuck yourself into
all that it holds
wrap in another
to iron out the wrinkles
notice that stars are
not all that twinkles
pour yourself thick when
it is you that you spread
for you are woven
with more than one thread

"I have already paid for all my future sins." Sade...(King of Sorrow)

Chelsea~
Member

since 2001-02-09

Posts 260
Ontario, CANADA

1 posted 2002-01-23 11:40 PM

I really like this!
Well written

jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

2 posted 2002-01-23 11:47 PM

Very well written, though I wanted more...(hog that I am).

Liked the title too.

jwesley

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

3 posted 2002-01-23 11:49 PM

helen - I love to seize the night. Words of your writing that touches...

BC

wayoutwalt
Member Elite

since 1999-06-22

Posts 4870
TEXAS (it's all big)

4 posted 2002-01-24 12:45 PM

i like this

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

5 posted 2002-01-25 05:12 AM

very nice! I loved this one! Yes!

sodpossom
Senior Member

since 2001-06-15

Posts 723
N.C

6 posted 2002-01-25 11:34 AM

Very well done indeed!

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