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Logan
Senior Member

since 2001-05-28

Posts 1641
Arkansas

0 posted 2002-01-21 08:37 PM

The dappled sunlight upon your face
in shadows and shades which give you grace
A trace of smile with look of eye
that tells me all, nothing to hide

The hair does stir with breath of wind
shades of shadow in concert bend
With mystery of subtle thoughts you send
stirring the soul of me within

With the hand you stretch to me
promising of love there is to be
In the sunlight that filters down
through the trees in silent sound

But the sound is not silent to me
for it can only be, a golden melody
Playing a concerto of rapture tune
In love’s garden of ever bloom

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

1 posted 2002-01-21 08:39 PM

With the hand you stretch to me
promising of love there is to be
In the sunlight that filters down
through the trees in silent sound

I love this verse *s
M

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

2 posted 2002-01-21 08:57 PM

Logan~ Logan~
What beauty~

'But the sound is not silent to me
for it can only be, a golden melody
Playing a concerto of rapture tune
In love’s garden of ever bloom'

Ohhhhhhh, I like this sooooooo much~
Your thoughts fall like silk across the screen~

*Hugs* *Hugs* *Hugs*
~*LittleGoose*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

3 posted 2002-01-21 09:00 PM

ain't he wonderful? sighs and battin' eyelashes...at last, somebody who understands SILENCE. hugs for this one, M'lo!

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

4 posted 2002-01-21 09:01 PM

A trace of smile with look of eye
that tells me all, nothing to hide
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Logan these two lines brought the smile to my face. My favourite stanza is the same one Maureen chose. Love this piece gentle keeper.
*Trace of smile with look of eye, and a hug*
NancyL.

~Love is the realization of a beautiful dream~

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

5 posted 2002-01-21 09:28 PM

Logan--You paint such beauty with your words, I think you must look through love's eyes.

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

6 posted 2002-01-21 09:32 PM

Logan, this is a very beautifully romantic
poem...Must be love at it's finest...

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

7 posted 2002-01-22 07:04 AM

I do think you have a muse in the wings, or is that on the wing...this is more than lovely, it is a Classic...

Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

8 posted 2002-01-22 08:43 AM

The hair does stir with breath of wind
shades of shadow in concert bend
With mystery of subtle thoughts you send
stirring the soul of me within
==================================
But the sound is not silent to me
for it can only be, a golden melody
Playing a concerto of rapture tune
In love's garden of ever bloom
=================================

Oh now I know where you've been...you and your muse went to Eden.
Paradise becomes you sweet keeper...and your muse

We wish ourselves beautiful ... we cry in the night.
It's not the love you feared ... but the fall from the height.

E.M.

Victoria

Member Ascendant

since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

9 posted 2002-01-22 08:44 AM

Beautifully written Logan..enjoyed very much..lovely words..

~Vic

You can complain because roses have thorns, or you can rejoice because thorns have roses.

-Ziggy

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

10 posted 2002-01-22 08:47 AM

"With the hand you stretch to me
promising of love there is to be
In the sunlight that filters down
through the trees in silent sound"

(sigh) You are sooooooo romantic, sweet friend, this was my favorite part, though I loved the whole poem and it sung with sunshine and joy all throughout! (big hugggsssss) This is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, may love symphony forever serenade in the garden of your heart! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Duncan, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (01-22-2002 08:47 AM).]

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

11 posted 2002-01-23 03:31 PM

Logan, this is so lovely, I just don't know what to say

except of course to tell you, I loved this

Corinne
Member Ascendant

since 1999-10-28

Posts 5167
state of confusion

12 posted 2002-01-24 06:42 PM

This is lovely and serene, Logan.

Peace my friend,

Cor

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

13 posted 2002-01-25 05:15 AM

very romantic, maybe love really is real if you write about it this way...hmmm.

sodpossom
Senior Member

since 2001-06-15

Posts 723
N.C

14 posted 2002-01-25 11:33 AM

Very sweet and romantic!

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