Open Poetry #18 |
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My Heart Of Glass |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859![]() |
My Heart Of Glass Of glass my heart is made. With care do handle it. For easily 'twould be to break, And shatter through and through. Then empty I would be. With nothing to replace, My heart that once inside me beat, That warmed my blood , And kept me whole. You'll shatter it, And never more My heart would beat. And never more My heart would be. Floria |
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RosePetal![]() ![]()
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
you have a beautiful golden heart Floria! Whoever breaks your heart will have to answer to me! (hugs ![]() Joanna |
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Greeneyes![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Floria~ So sad....brought tears to my eyes.... ![]() be well, be safe....PEACE Greeneyes~ Tomorrow's another day and I'm thirsty any way so bring on the rain [This message has been edited by Greeneyes (01-23-2002 07:54 PM).] |
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Morcastlin Member
since 2002-01-14
Posts 244The Jersey Shore, USA |
Oh, this is so sad! This had a very interesting and creative syle! I really enoyed this! Bravo! Love, Bonnie |
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Magnus![]() ![]()
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Floria, let no one ever say that you are not an accomplished poet...Very well done.. |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Rose Petal. that is so sweet of you to say that, thank you dear. floria Floria |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Thank you green eyes, I enjoy your poetry too. floria Floria |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Thank you Bonnie, I appreciate your reply. floria Floria |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Oh Magnus you have me blushing, thank you so much. floria Floria |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
floria: I sense a tender loving heart in you A rare precious jewel of morning dew Such treasure is too valuable for glass For you're the finest crystal that God has. -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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brianbeaudry Member
since 2001-07-20
Posts 410Northern Ontario Canada |
Hearts are fragile, easily hurt by deception!!It is ironic, that which is capable of such feats of strength, generate such warmth and console, and gift such security, could so easily be slain!!! An amazing post Floria!!! |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
strbbux - you mentioned that you would post this one and I'm glad that you did. 'Heart Of Glass', Yes, what I felt In The Forest that day... BC |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
![]() (tears fall down my cheeks) Oh Floria, this is sooooooo very sad, my heart cries out to you and your tears! (big huggsssssss) I pray this is not a feeling you have right now, but if it is, all our hearts are with you and knows deep down your heart can never be broken and will shine again with porcelain joy! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, God Bless You! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Floria, thank you for sharing! ![]() ![]() ![]() May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* My heart is so filled with cracks that I think it would just shatter if I was hurt again. Magnificent writing. You know how to express the tenderness of your heart so very well. **big hugs** ![]() Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Newell, You made me cry. Good tears.. this was so nice of you to write this, I am honored.Thank you very much for your kindness. floria brian thank you, You know how much I admired your writing. floria Yes, Bill when I read your poem I went into my files looking for it. Thanks for you poem, and reminding me I had this. floria Thank you Noah, I wrote this a few months back. I am feeling better. All you nice wonderful poets on here, really lift my spirits. thank you. floria Thank you startime, I just wonder when the heart has had enough..I hope your heart heals soon. floria Floria |
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Victoria![]()
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Oh yes sometimes the heart feels like glass ..and sometimes it is shattered..and very sad when that happens..hugs enjoyed floria ~Vic You can complain because roses have thorns, or you can rejoice because thorns have roses. |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
You know what's really wonderful about shattered hearts - they always, magically, mend again, love again, vibrantly beat again. Such a blessing! jwesley |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
This poem is so beautifully creative and sad.....but, I can't believe that you have a heart of glass, Floria. You strike me as a very warm person, and glass is so cold. I loved the poem anyway! ![]() copyright2002 Lyra Nesius |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Thank you Victoria, very much.floria Floria |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Jwesly, so right, and thank God for that too.floria Floria |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
HAHA thanks Madame, well glass shatters when broken or hurt. maybe I have a candle inside my heart to keep it warm. LOL floria Floria |
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N orth Carolina Girl Senior Member
since 2001-12-04
Posts 962NC,USA |
Floria,this was so different but wonderfully written.I`m sure there are alot of people who feel like their heart is made of glass. ![]() ![]() Juanita |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
Beautiful, Floria! It is so very true, that we forget how very fragile we all really are! Hugs, Ellie A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails. |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Juanita thank you so very much. floria Floria |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Thank you much Ellie, yes and after awhile it becomes even more fragile. floria Floria |
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