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Ramble |
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Poet deVine
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since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
ebb within this heart beaten back can we be test of me color of black where do I start? put away from the rest cut lose the bind hum the tune ending soon within this mind given all my best conceive with me night of pine give of smile in witch’s while take of mine soul's poetry |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Seldom does a poem, let alone a 'ramble'...leave me speechless. I've read this 4 times. You had my attention at the first verse. And held it...even at this hour. This is most incredible. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Soooooooo wonderfully inventive, sweet friend, I too have these ramblings all the time, like I'm dreaming on and on and a soundtrack of melodies is playing as I rest my head and both smile and cry! (kiss on cheek) This is wonderful, sweet friend, I just love the wonderful words you write, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
ebb within this heart put away from the rest where do I start? given all my best conceive with me soul's poetry beaten back color of black cut lose the bind within this mind night of pine take of mine can we be test of me hum the tune ending soon give of smile in witch’s while *there are myriad ways to put this together... |
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Moonlight Romeo
since 2001-09-10
Posts 982The heart of you |
Magnetic poetry taken to another level?? I love this idea. With phrases instead of words. I would say that this "Ramble" is merely an exercise in shape and form, and one that's done very well. What light through yon window breaks? It is the east, and Juliet is the sun. |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
You do ramble well, PdV - I'll have to give this a try myself...  |
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mauddib Member
since 2002-01-12
Posts 119melbourne australia |
The style is refreshing, simialar to triads in music and so it also had that 3/4 time. I would gladly take from you and feed the soul poetry, as of conceiveing............. |
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His Poet Senior Member
since 2001-12-18
Posts 750 |
Poet, this was enjoyable and a fun variation. I do like your second version the best. Well done and interesting poetry. Cheryl |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Poet deVine~ soul's poetry to read these words...Fantastic Ramble indeed....I ramble a lot as well, but nothing like this...  Lauren~ Tomorrow's another day |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
this has a megnetism to it o yuh |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Actually I'm with Walty on this... very magnetic. I enjoyed Sharon I like this style from you. Maree |
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