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Open Poetry #18

Poem #1

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

0 posted 2002-01-23 05:23 PM

Winter was long this year,
Raindrops to hear
Pushing It Is end
Into spring,
Melting Ice
Candles
In summer,
leaves fades away,
Keeping the summer back
Deid
Leaves feel quickly,
I found It each page,
The morning light

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

1 posted 2002-01-23 05:47 PM

Nothing wrong with this poem Vandana...
I can feel the change of seasons in the
poem..

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

2 posted 2002-01-23 05:48 PM

all the seasons read before my eyes, lovely, Vandana

Kathleen--(Kay)
A true friend does not love you for who you are, but in spite of who you are." -- Caroline Tran

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

3 posted 2002-01-23 06:14 PM

(smiles) Soooooooo gorgeous, sweet friend, all the beauty of the seasons shines in your wonderful words, this is beautiful! (big hugggsssss) We all love you so much, sweet friend, light fills every word! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Vandana, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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