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Masquerade
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Masquerade |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada 
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This is contemporary rock and the three line verses work well with the music I have in my head. There's a short set up music break in between verses. Masquerade I see the way you state your fame the latest styles a fashion dame the coolest look miss Chatelaine But your nights are lonely girl beyond that look's another world and it sets my mind to whirl. Chorus: I know you're searchin for a better place while you're playin out your masquerade how much time is left for you to save you're gettin older in your masquerade It's so strange this life you lead lost in the land of make believe with fairy tales and crazy dreams. I feel your fear when I'm near you you entertain to hide the truth but you're so helpless in that mood. rep chorus: I know the way you play the game painted nails and long gold chains your ruby lips your perfect frame. I'd love to see your long black hair across my pillows everywhere under your skin I'd find you there. Rep Chorus: I know you're searchin for a better place while you're playin out your masquerade how much time is left for you to save you're gettin older in your masquerade........ © Eric True He he that sure was fun. But hey, I'll see her on the elevator again tommorrow and the next day and the next day and....... just imagining things.... ho hum hum time for bed and dream about her!! The role of poetry is to utter the un-utterable; to open up |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I sure wish you'd add the notation, my finger is almost recovered enough to pick up my guitar!  and hmmm...love in an elevator?"Going...DOWN?"  have missed ya my friend, enjoyed...keep the music rolling our way! |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
   (smiles) Ooohhhhh...isn't it just wonderful where we can get our inspirations sometimes! (smiles) This is soooooooo wonderfully written, sweet friend, may you dream on about her and may your dreams come true before your very eyes! (big hugggsssss) We all love you so much, sweet friend, I would love to hear you sing! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Eric, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Eric--a woman with you in an elevator, is bound to fall. Loved the poem/song, as always I do! |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Ethome, it is so GOOD to see you again. This really struck a chord with me. I enjoyed it very much  Kathleen--(Kay) |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I know the way you play the game painted nails and long gold chains your ruby lips your perfect frame. I'd love to see your long black hair across my pillows everywhere under your skin I'd find you there. ======================================= Does our dear Ethome have a crush? Is he smitten and bitten? well you sure are sweetly inspired...shes got ya singing in elevators LOL you Rock E-babers sweet dreams We wish ourselves beautiful ... we cry in the night. |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
enjoyed the lyrics and well if you meet in the elevator enjoy the ride |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Thanks everyone for taking the time to read this piece. I appreciate the comments and input as always! |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
whooohoooo elevator lifts your spirit up, and hey I like this song. Hope she inspire you to sing a lot more. enjoyed the read as always Eric ((hugs)) Charisma ~*Theresia~* |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Hope this one wish is a horse of a different color, for she sounds...perfect for you... |
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seraphin Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1004Michigan |
I'd love to see your long black hair across my pillows everywhere under your skin I'd find you there. The whole work is wonderful, but this just grabs you. Really nice work. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Thank again for the comments I apprecate you all taking the time to read this! You're very kind! The role of poetry is to utter the un-utterable; to open up |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
PT darling boy Oh my I’m stunned with admiration this has got to be one of you utter utter best. Truly the line and flow in this is absolutely excellent. You are always a fabulous writer, in this you have excelled yourself. If you keep writing like this I shall start running out of superlatives and that would never do would it? Yes darling boy I'm back, I wouldn't necessarily say that is a good thing. You'd have to read a poem or two to tell me. YOU however are outstandingly good you always were you know. Love and warm stuff As always Mushy To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1 |
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