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Martie

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since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

0 posted 2002-01-23 04:57 PM

Whisper Her Just One

The sound of air on the roof
crosses six panes of glass into moan
and stirs the leaf
whispering secrets across the patio

They think I can't say
the satin underneath the gay
in the place that was summer
changes spent true
but sent twirling too
across the winter grass

I hear them giggle my expense
in only breathing words
to the passing shadow
what does she know they say of flying
or the taste of a tree

We dance not for her poetry
or the cave she has built for love
we are the bite that blinks her view
and opens up the keen unseen

See how she turns her eyes sideways
to cut the glare of our dare
we all danced and ribald with frantic air
she is dense with thought and too soft

Let us fun this sun in her doorway
until she dazzles the page with her loose muse
and makes a leaf treasure on the page of time
whisper her just one sound divine

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2002-01-23 05:02 PM

Darn darn darn...IWIHWT....and you know I absolutely danced with it...

ok, ok, so I can only tuck it away to reread at my leisure...[what leisure?]...

sprinkle some of that pixie dust over this way, my girl....

Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

2 posted 2002-01-23 05:14 PM

until she dazzles the page with her loose muse
and makes a leaf treasure on the page of time
whisper her just one sound divine
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and when her muse is let loose....there is no touching her ...
dazzel us over and over again...
we never get our fill of your whipsered treasures.
(you do know how cool this poem is dont you)

I'm like a broken record that you can play ...
Repeating (as if it matters) ... everything I say.

Gin Blossoms

vandana

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since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

3 posted 2002-01-23 05:15 PM

enjoy

Magnus

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since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

4 posted 2002-01-23 05:26 PM

Martie, only you can write so many variations and say so much with them...

I envy you..

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

5 posted 2002-01-23 06:51 PM

(big hugggssssss) WOW, I LOVE IT!!! And may she keep dancing forever and may her innocence and imagination run wild in her muse always! (kiss on cheek) This is soooooo gorgeous sweet friend, I just love the way you write, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Martie, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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